Discontent
Mosty free verse3 total reviews
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Hello, Poet: This is a great epitaph for such a miserable and grumpy person. Hopefully now he can really rest in peace. At least his gravestone has a lot to say about him from someone who obviously knew him well. (lol) I like this entry. It is humorous and wordy. The colors and whole display really jumped out and grabbed my attention. I hope that you do well in this contest.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
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Hello, Poet: This is a great epitaph for such a miserable and grumpy person. Hopefully now he can really rest in peace. At least his gravestone has a lot to say about him from someone who obviously knew him well. (lol) I like this entry. It is humorous and wordy. The colors and whole display really jumped out and grabbed my attention. I hope that you do well in this contest.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
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Yes of course he was imaginary!!!! not) I?m glad you enjoyed the post , thanks for reviewing
Warm hugs
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Author, Very witty, very good. Lots of descriptive writing. It's a good thing that this ol' chap liked to golf because nothing every changes in that world. Great ending. I'm sure if he could speak, he would have complaints about his coffin ... not plush enough, too dark when lid is closed -- someone could have had a life-time battery light enclosed ... blah, blah, blah. Author, any day a person gets up and isn't look at wood a/k/a ... a coffin, it is a good day. A fun poem. Great free verse. Your poem made me smile. "Free verse is free-flow from the heart ~ LateBloomer"
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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Hello Author, Very witty, very good. Lots of descriptive writing. It's a good thing that this ol' chap liked to golf because nothing every changes in that world. Great ending. I'm sure if he could speak, he would have complaints about his coffin ... not plush enough, too dark when lid is closed -- someone could have had a life-time battery light enclosed ... blah, blah, blah. Author, any day a person gets up and isn't look at wood a/k/a ... a coffin, it is a good day. A fun poem. Great free verse. Your poem made me smile. "Free verse is free-flow from the heart ~ LateBloomer"
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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Too bad there was not much gratitude for life.
Thanks for your great review and 6 twinkieshugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Very funny poem about an unhappy man who is still discontented even after death! You can never please some people! Moaning is a habit that some people actually enjoy! Your write is fun and I did smile, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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Very funny poem about an unhappy man who is still discontented even after death! You can never please some people! Moaning is a habit that some people actually enjoy! Your write is fun and I did smile, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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This guy was not grateful for life! He always found a negative. I agree with you it becomes a habit thanks for reviewing hugsTrisha.
