Spiritual Santa
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Give me handpicked flowers over storebought every day. This piece is so true, i want special gifts that come from the heart
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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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Give me handpicked flowers over storebought every day. This piece is so true, i want special gifts that come from the heart
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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Yes, commercialism is pushing spirituality out the door.. it?s breeding a generation of discontented youngsters. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Poetic Friend
Bucket List, I agree wholeheartedly with your poem. Some people gets so caught up in the commercialism of Christmas that do not realize a kind gesture could be the biggest and greatest gift of all.
In 2013, my mother was in critical condition (near death), and I practically lived in the hospital. I was rarely home. Fro Christmas, my friend gave me a gift certificate for a cleaning service for house cleaning. It was the best Christmas gift someone could have given me.
I love thempoetic format you used to convey such an important message.
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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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Bucket List, I agree wholeheartedly with your poem. Some people gets so caught up in the commercialism of Christmas that do not realize a kind gesture could be the biggest and greatest gift of all.
In 2013, my mother was in critical condition (near death), and I practically lived in the hospital. I was rarely home. Fro Christmas, my friend gave me a gift certificate for a cleaning service for house cleaning. It was the best Christmas gift someone could have given me.
I love thempoetic format you used to convey such an important message.
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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Your example was great. I feel that all this push for materialism just leads to more discontent. Teenagers are already atacking for sneakers and cell phones......what next?
Thanks so much for your review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful poem you have penned about Christmas and what we can really do that would help someone. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Thank you for submitting in the club! Blessings! Teri
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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This is a very beautiful poem you have penned about Christmas and what we can really do that would help someone. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Thank you for submitting in the club! Blessings! Teri
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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Teri, this is an honor! I really appreciate your work founding the club. Hopefully, people will be appreciative of what they have and His gifts to us. Thank you for your wonderful review
Hugs, Trisha
