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Spiritual Santa

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem. That face in the clouds look very much like a Santa Claus. A message from God to remind us what Christmas is really about. Santa is just a tool to make us feel jolly and happy.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    That?s the idea I was looking to link together ~ thank you! I was happy to find that picture. I really appreciate your reviews. I hope your health is blessed , hugs
    Trisha
Comment from poetwatch
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It's a good poem. A reminder to everyone who is the spirit of Christmas. It ain't Santa though. Life is a gift that we all take for granted. I wish people could see with their hearts not only with their eyes, but business is business. A good read thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Business is vital, but not to the extent it has become,. There?s over kill in ?them thar shops with greed in the middle.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Thanks very much for your kind review,hugs Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks about spiritual Santa and teaches why we should praise the Lord as and when He comes to us and if Santa's gifts shine through; I like. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    I feel that yes, business is important. But there?s overkill in ?them thar stores? and greeed in the middle. Thank you so much for reviewing
    Trisha
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, blessings
    Trisha
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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A lovely piece to bring to mind the essence of the season. Christmas is a spirit deep within us that brings out everything good and right about mankind. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    But I fear it?s getting more and more shallow. Commerce has really put it behind $$$$. Thanks again for reviewing. I?m praying for your health.
    Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Ricky1024
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This Christmas piece was well-written I enjoyed it the font and background were perfect for the holiday it read well flowed well with no grammar issues ejective content object the content work excellent descriptive measures were perfect thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2017

reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
    I?m so glad you enjoyed tis one. Materialism is not bad, but it?s taking the place of our spiritual side.
    Thanks Ricky for reviewing kindly
    Hug Trisha
reply by Ricky1024 on 26-Nov-2017
    As a Latter-day Saint priest of the Church of Jesus Christ and also passed your pastor with a Church of Lamb of God stay spiritual talk to Ricky 1024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A great tribute to the man in red and his role as a giver of gifts! A spiritual Santa will visit us all and bring joy this coming season, a delightful thought! Best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2017

reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
    Thanks for your review as usual
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mimi Linny
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Loved your poem on the Spiritual Santa who provides us with special "free" gifts every day of the year - and those that we should truly be thankful for... Wonderful submission for the Happy Holidays event in the "Shout Outs to the Lord!"

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2017

reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
    Thank you kind Mimi , your review is very supportive.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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This is a nice spiritual Etheree about Christmas and non-tangible gifts.
Your message is clear and oh so true.
To much of our society is based on the value of the dollar.
It's nice to receive homemade gifts, they are the ones that really mean something.
Sharon

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
    I feel that commerce is encouraging discontent. looking for materialistic happiness is the wrong path.
    Thanks, Sharon
    Hugs Trisha
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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So true Bucketlist. I would much rather spend time with family/friends than shopping & all that other stuff. I love Christmas Eve services. Good job on your awesome poem. I agree with your sentiments. Thanks for sharing & caring. Jan

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
    Hi Jan, I appreciate your complimentary review.
    Hugs , Trisha
Comment from smileycloud
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Lovely words
very nice form/style
the word imagery tells a most beautiful and loving story
the pictured image you chose compliments your writing quite nicely
your intuition and insight gives your poem quite a punch
a profound thought made up of caring and emotions has written an excellent piece
your natural ways are so very endearing
blessings
have a smiley day

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
    Blessings to you for such a wonderderful review. It was a great evening start. Thanks so much
    Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
    Blessings to you for such a wonderderful review. It was a great evening start. Thanks so much
    Hugs, Trisha