Sorrow
Loop Poetry Contest Submission37 total reviews
Comment from sfharper
I love the opening stanza, the visual of morning doves is something I can relate to and has high impact. The poem slowly unveils a personal connection that is sorrowful for the reader and poet because of the loneliness conveyed. Very powerful poem, I hope the narrator doesn't disappear.
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I love the opening stanza, the visual of morning doves is something I can relate to and has high impact. The poem slowly unveils a personal connection that is sorrowful for the reader and poet because of the loneliness conveyed. Very powerful poem, I hope the narrator doesn't disappear.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a lovely Loop contest entry, my friend. It's a sad and spiritual poem.
Good luck to you. ~Kerry
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This is a lovely Loop contest entry, my friend. It's a sad and spiritual poem.
Good luck to you. ~Kerry
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Thank you so much for sharing your lovely Loop Poem for the contest. Your repeating words are all clear, and you chose the perfect picture to compliment the piece,
~patty~
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Hi there;
Thank you so much for sharing your lovely Loop Poem for the contest. Your repeating words are all clear, and you chose the perfect picture to compliment the piece,
~patty~
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
Comment from rjuselius
Oh wow, this is an outstanding piece of poetry dear idamarty! I think this should do very well in the contest! The poem flows with ease and it is written by finesse and elegance.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
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Oh wow, this is an outstanding piece of poetry dear idamarty! I think this should do very well in the contest! The poem flows with ease and it is written by finesse and elegance.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written loop poem about sorrow. When we lose a loved one our hearts are overpowered with sorrow. We have to go through the mourning process, to fill our hearts with hope and laughter again.
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A very well-written loop poem about sorrow. When we lose a loved one our hearts are overpowered with sorrow. We have to go through the mourning process, to fill our hearts with hope and laughter again.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
Comment from Picture this
I am rewarded with inspiration as I continue to read poetry written from the hearts of FS community members. Your poem has embraced symbolism, sentiment, rhyme, imagery and feeling and lovingly nurtured them all. While I have yet to consider writing a Loop style poem, I get so much satisfaction from learning from others. Thank you for the gift. I am certain that you gain so much comfort from your beautifully penned words. Kind regards. Diane
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I am rewarded with inspiration as I continue to read poetry written from the hearts of FS community members. Your poem has embraced symbolism, sentiment, rhyme, imagery and feeling and lovingly nurtured them all. While I have yet to consider writing a Loop style poem, I get so much satisfaction from learning from others. Thank you for the gift. I am certain that you gain so much comfort from your beautifully penned words. Kind regards. Diane
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
Comment from zekeziemann
Congratulations for being able to use your background as backdrop for a wonderful poem. Well rhymed and it flows so easily. (As an aside...the feared death of a loved one does not haunt a Christian.)
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Congratulations for being able to use your background as backdrop for a wonderful poem. Well rhymed and it flows so easily. (As an aside...the feared death of a loved one does not haunt a Christian.)
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your loop poem "Sorrow". You wrote it beautifully, followed all thw rules for this genre anf chose a very appropriate picrure.
All the best,.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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I enjoyed reading your loop poem "Sorrow". You wrote it beautifully, followed all thw rules for this genre anf chose a very appropriate picrure.
All the best,.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing and for the six stars, they are truly appreciated. So glad you enjoyed it. Take care and have a nice evening.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a truly beautiful and plaintive poem, conforming perfectly with the prompt - well constructed in both rhythm and easy rhyme. Best of luck in the contest to a fellow contestant...
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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In my opinion, a truly beautiful and plaintive poem, conforming perfectly with the prompt - well constructed in both rhythm and easy rhyme. Best of luck in the contest to a fellow contestant...
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Hi, I just read and commented on your entry. Truly beautiful! Thank you for reading and reviewing mine. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Take care and have a nice evening.
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You are very welcome indeed, my pleasure, and thank you also...Eve
Comment from Thomas Bowling
You have written an excellent loop poem. You expressed yourself perfectly. This is a very good contest entry. I'm sure you will do well. I tried to write a loop poem, but nothing worked.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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You have written an excellent loop poem. You expressed yourself perfectly. This is a very good contest entry. I'm sure you will do well. I tried to write a loop poem, but nothing worked.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing Thomas. I had a really hard time writing one as well. Glad you liked it. Take care and have a nice evening.
