The Fall
All the signs of changing season are there2 total reviews
Comment from TAB_that's me
I like your loop poem written in short form. I'm not much of a fan of the loop form but it works better in a short poem.
Good luck in the contest.
teresa
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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I like your loop poem written in short form. I'm not much of a fan of the loop form but it works better in a short poem.
Good luck in the contest.
teresa
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Thank you , Teresa, for taking the trouble to read and review my loop attempt.
Comment from patcelaw
You did well with this format. I am not a fan of the loop format. It to me is not a logical format. The repeat of the words in the looping tend to cause me to lose my concentration. Patricia
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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You did well with this format. I am not a fan of the loop format. It to me is not a logical format. The repeat of the words in the looping tend to cause me to lose my concentration. Patricia
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my loop poem. This format is new to me but I thought I?d give it a go.
