The liquid curtain
A sea of blue danger17 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Waves, I can just see you surfing...amazing my sweet friend...I love the description in your poem you...and this picture is awesome...sorry I am so late...have a wonderful trip...love your poem...and love your picture...very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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HI Waves, I can just see you surfing...amazing my sweet friend...I love the description in your poem you...and this picture is awesome...sorry I am so late...have a wonderful trip...love your poem...and love your picture...very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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I am writing this reply from a tropical island in the middle of the Indian ocean. We are on a 10 day surfing holiday hence I haven't been posting of late
dip
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that is wonderful Waves...I was wondering why you stopped popping up in my pm...but I read your profile...was so glad nothing was wrong...xxoo love
Comment from robyn corum
Dip,
Wow. This is astounding - I can't believe I know anyone who would risk trying this kind of act of nature! *smile* Kudos to you, my brave friend. Enjoyed this!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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Dip,
Wow. This is astounding - I can't believe I know anyone who would risk trying this kind of act of nature! *smile* Kudos to you, my brave friend. Enjoyed this!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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Thanks as always for the review much appreciated.
dip
Comment from Sylvia Page
Hello Dip
Are you a surfer? Wish I was, too old now to even dare!
Wonderful word imagery. It brings out the essence of the surf and the sport, leave alone the adrenaline rush.
Best wishes
Sylvia
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Hello Dip
Are you a surfer? Wish I was, too old now to even dare!
Wonderful word imagery. It brings out the essence of the surf and the sport, leave alone the adrenaline rush.
Best wishes
Sylvia
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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I surf every day Sylvia it is my first passion I really appreciate your comments
dip
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Lovely, Australia?
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I am from Sydney Australia
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Most of my family is in Australia, Melbourne, Canberra, Sydney & Brisbane and I float between Sri Lanka and Oz doing God's work.
Comment from dragonpoet
I like the metaphor of the wave being a ocean slide like the slides at water parks.
This wave seems to be a perfect mixture of the beauty and danger in nature.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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I like the metaphor of the wave being a ocean slide like the slides at water parks.
This wave seems to be a perfect mixture of the beauty and danger in nature.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Thanks so much Joan much appreciated
dip
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You are so very welcome, dip
Joan
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very impressive, dip. I always have enjoyed watching surfing on TV. Takes a brave soul to do this and I gather that you are a surfer. Your poem rhymes well and I think this is one of the best that I have read from you. You seem enthused about this topic and your passion for the sport shows in descriptive tight writing. Marilyn
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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This is very impressive, dip. I always have enjoyed watching surfing on TV. Takes a brave soul to do this and I gather that you are a surfer. Your poem rhymes well and I think this is one of the best that I have read from you. You seem enthused about this topic and your passion for the sport shows in descriptive tight writing. Marilyn
Comment Written 18-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Thank you Marilyn. AS I write I am sitting in a hut on a tropical Island in the middle of the Indian Ocean on a surfing holiday.
Surfing is my first passion. Thank you so much for the review.
dip
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It seems you have an enviable lifestyle, dip. Good for you. Marilyn
Comment from Unspoken94
I too surf, but not as often as you. My place is called Ocean Beach the competition is fierce for every wave. And I've never had the experience you share in this wonderful
poem, but as I read it, I was vicariously on that board.
Dip, do you have Kindle?
Bill
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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I too surf, but not as often as you. My place is called Ocean Beach the competition is fierce for every wave. And I've never had the experience you share in this wonderful
poem, but as I read it, I was vicariously on that board.
Dip, do you have Kindle?
Bill
Comment Written 18-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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Hi Bill let me first apologize for not getting back to on your wonderful copy on CD of Conversations. I cried many times You are such a wonderful compassionate person.
I am away at present on a surfing holiday for 10 days on a tropical island in the Indian ocean and the internet is very temperamental on the island and falls out constantly
dip
Comment from Thal1959
A nice short and sweet one, D. Love the pic. The three stanzas say what they have to say and the rhyme and rhythm is just fine. Kind of makes one wonder why blue is considered a "calming" color. I doubt the surfer is feeling quiescent.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
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A nice short and sweet one, D. Love the pic. The three stanzas say what they have to say and the rhyme and rhythm is just fine. Kind of makes one wonder why blue is considered a "calming" color. I doubt the surfer is feeling quiescent.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
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Thanks so much Thal much appreciated as always. Thanks for the great 6. Always appreciated.
dip
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You're welcome - it was my pleasure, D.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I absolutely love the title, it is so appropriate and your poem has warmth and I can feel the love you have for the ocean and the surf, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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I absolutely love the title, it is so appropriate and your poem has warmth and I can feel the love you have for the ocean and the surf, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much Dolly. I am glad you liked it
dip
Comment from Pantygynt
I hesitate to use the word awesome, because it is sadly overworked these days, but the picture here really is awesome. It must be the ultimate thrill to ride that. Definitely not something for the fainthearted to attempt. Your little poem here says it all.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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I hesitate to use the word awesome, because it is sadly overworked these days, but the picture here really is awesome. It must be the ultimate thrill to ride that. Definitely not something for the fainthearted to attempt. Your little poem here says it all.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thankyou so much Panty I love my surfing and I try to do it every day, but this wave in Tahiti is a bit out of my league.
Yes surfing is awesome. I am surprised you have never tried it Jim
dip
Comment from sandy montgomery
I thought this poem was excellent. I felt like I experienced this wave right along with you. Great imagery with deightful rhyme and rhythm. I appreciated the notes which helped with any language barriers. Very well done. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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I thought this poem was excellent. I felt like I experienced this wave right along with you. Great imagery with deightful rhyme and rhythm. I appreciated the notes which helped with any language barriers. Very well done. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Surfing is a great sport As I write this I am sitting in the foyer of a hotel on the mainland of Indonesia Just waiting for the boat to make the crossing taking us to a tropical Island to surf for 10 days.
Thanks as always Sandy.
