Upon A River
Destination is unknown when travelling on the river.7 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice poem you have penned about the river and destination not really known, but just going with the flow so to speak. Very nice imagery with the picture and great wording! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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This is a very nice poem you have penned about the river and destination not really known, but just going with the flow so to speak. Very nice imagery with the picture and great wording! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing this piece. I love the water, obliviously.
Have a blessed and safe Thanksgiving,
Brigitte
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you too my friend!
Comment from kahpot
Yes an excellent view on what the river can make us dream about, I have taken many trips on the river ( Murray) in Sth. Australia and your beautiful poem describes this very well****kahpot
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
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Yes an excellent view on what the river can make us dream about, I have taken many trips on the river ( Murray) in Sth. Australia and your beautiful poem describes this very well****kahpot
Comment Written 18-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
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I have always wanted to see Australia and by water would be my dream come true. Thank you for reading and reviewing so kindly.
Have a great weekend,
Brigitte
Comment from smileycloud
a lovely dream indeed
the word imagery is magical
the pictures you have chosen are lovely
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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a lovely dream indeed
the word imagery is magical
the pictures you have chosen are lovely
have a smiley day
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thank you kindly. Have a great day and weekend upcoming.
brigitte
Comment from Lucian Carter
I've canoed. This captures that feeling well. To dream of the peace of the river is a wonderful dream as long as things don't turn sour mid-dream. Here, life is but a dream. Great piece.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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I've canoed. This captures that feeling well. To dream of the peace of the river is a wonderful dream as long as things don't turn sour mid-dream. Here, life is but a dream. Great piece.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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You are so right. I have been out during severe weather and it is not fun.
Brigitte
Comment from writerjen
Nice poem. I like the feel of this poem and the description of the river. You did a good job telling how the river makes you feel. Good ending...the pictures seem to add to the poem without over powering it.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Nice poem. I like the feel of this poem and the description of the river. You did a good job telling how the river makes you feel. Good ending...the pictures seem to add to the poem without over powering it.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. Obliviously, I love the water.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a warm well-written poem. It has a very nice flow and rhymes very well. I could feel your love, your serenity as your floating shore to shore. The pictures were beautiful, It's a great addition to your poem.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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This is a warm well-written poem. It has a very nice flow and rhymes very well. I could feel your love, your serenity as your floating shore to shore. The pictures were beautiful, It's a great addition to your poem.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I love the water, obliviously.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
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I couldn't tell, lol.
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I wish I was a river rat...lol
Comment from poetwatch
Just to see a river on a lovely any day is to relax floating on a cloud. I feel my anxiety going away
As I follow the lines of your poem. It is very good poetry coming from the heart. Thank you very much for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Just to see a river on a lovely any day is to relax floating on a cloud. I feel my anxiety going away
As I follow the lines of your poem. It is very good poetry coming from the heart. Thank you very much for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Have a great evening.
brigitte
