My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 72 "Christmas Eve"a collection of my poetry
21 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Real good ~patty~ and very catch with rhyme and your clever p q u r s words for this ABC contest
Best to you in this contest
Gert
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
Real good ~patty~ and very catch with rhyme and your clever p q u r s words for this ABC contest
Best to you in this contest
Gert
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Hi, Gert;
I'm glad you enjoyed my Christmas Eve Poem,
~patty~
Comment from teols2016
Looks like another poetry format was mastered. Santa does seem to like sneaking around people's houses...at least he's got candy for the children. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
Looks like another poetry format was mastered. Santa does seem to like sneaking around people's houses...at least he's got candy for the children. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
I'm glad you enjoyed my Christmas Eve Poem,
~patty~
Comment from Brigitte Elko
Very nicely written and the picture is so appropriate. This is an excellent contest entry. It looks like your getting into your holiday countdown spirit.
Good luck.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
Very nicely written and the picture is so appropriate. This is an excellent contest entry. It looks like your getting into your holiday countdown spirit.
Good luck.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Hi, Brigitte;
I'm glad you enjoyed my Christmas Eve Poem,
~patty~
Comment from BOO ghost
Christmas already? Pot bellied fellow gets stuck in chimney. Presentation looks like a post card. BOO has been a good ghost. Want my stocking stuffed with candy and rattling K-Mart chains. Milk & cookies is just fine. Feeding a ghost is not a crime. BOO-tastic!~
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
Christmas already? Pot bellied fellow gets stuck in chimney. Presentation looks like a post card. BOO has been a good ghost. Want my stocking stuffed with candy and rattling K-Mart chains. Milk & cookies is just fine. Feeding a ghost is not a crime. BOO-tastic!~
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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I will add your requests to my list for Santa. I'm writing my letter today --- I'm hoping he thinks I've been a good little old lady,
LOL
Thanks for reading and reviewing,
~patty~
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Might as well wish big and buy super sized stockings, big enough to put a Cadillac in. Santa best come or I will haunt the Elves and Munchkins at the North Pole.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good Christmas ABC poem.
Well done. The picture is lovely.
Your poem is well rhymed and well said.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
A good Christmas ABC poem.
Well done. The picture is lovely.
Your poem is well rhymed and well said.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Hi, Sharon;
I'm glad you enjoyed my Christmas Eve Poem,
~patty~
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Patty
= Good ABC poem entry.
= Gosh, it will be here before we know it.
= Hope you do well in the contest. Good Luck.
Cheers, J
Have a good day/evening!
(*>*) A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*>*)
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
Hi, Patty
= Good ABC poem entry.
= Gosh, it will be here before we know it.
= Hope you do well in the contest. Good Luck.
Cheers, J
Have a good day/evening!
(*>*) A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*>*)
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Hi, Jax;
I'm glad you enjoyed my Christmas Eve Poem,
~patty~
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A delightful Christmassy write filled with promise of gifts and festive joys! Sharing out the sweets and chocolate once again! More indulgences! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
A delightful Christmassy write filled with promise of gifts and festive joys! Sharing out the sweets and chocolate once again! More indulgences! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Hi, Dolly;
I'm glad you enjoyed my Christmas Eve Poem,
~patty~
Comment from Sasha
This is a super entry for this fun contest. This is the first time I have seen an ABC Poem limited to five lines...an added complication (at least it would be for me). Nice work with this one and I wish you all th best in this contest too.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
This is a super entry for this fun contest. This is the first time I have seen an ABC Poem limited to five lines...an added complication (at least it would be for me). Nice work with this one and I wish you all th best in this contest too.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Hi, Sasha;
Thank you so much for reading, reviewing, and your well wishes,
~patty~
Comment from Bucketlist
The jolly old man in the white beard comes out of hiding! I wonder how many children still believe in him. Commercialism has kind of diminished the atmosphere because people are thinking more bout gifts than His Gifts.
I liked your poem , thanks for sharing
Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
The jolly old man in the white beard comes out of hiding! I wonder how many children still believe in him. Commercialism has kind of diminished the atmosphere because people are thinking more bout gifts than His Gifts.
I liked your poem , thanks for sharing
Hugs, Trisha
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Hi, Trisha;
Thank you so much for reading my little poem,
~patty~
Comment from doggymad
Cute Patty, I love the images you have created in this short poem.
Poor old Santa trying to please every little child and not always getting it right.
Best of luck in the contest
hugs
Freda
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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
Cute Patty, I love the images you have created in this short poem.
Poor old Santa trying to please every little child and not always getting it right.
Best of luck in the contest
hugs
Freda
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Hi, Freda;
Thank you so much for your thoughtful review,
~patty~