haiku ( white lacy ripples)
beach at winter2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A great descriptive Haiku likening the scene to white lace over grey on a winter's beach, I could feel the chill in the air and the fresh breeze, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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A great descriptive Haiku likening the scene to white lace over grey on a winter's beach, I could feel the chill in the air and the fresh breeze, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the thoughts.
Comment from Cybertron1986
Wow! This brought me back to the time I first visited my local beach during the fall. Every descriptive word you used hit the target of that emotional memory for me. This is good poetry.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Wow! This brought me back to the time I first visited my local beach during the fall. Every descriptive word you used hit the target of that emotional memory for me. This is good poetry.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading and commenting. Glad it brought back memories. elaine
