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End the tension

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Comment from Kerry Robinson
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This is a fantastic six word entry, my friend, very cool picture to compliment it.
Good luck to you. ~Kerry

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018

Comment from Brigitte Elko
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This is a powerful six word poem. This author did an outstanding job delivering a great relevant message. For the contest, this is a wonderful and significant entry. The picture selected is complimentary. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Brigitte

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2018

Comment from mermaids
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This is an excellent entry for the contest. You did well with the six words, one line form. And yes, freedom always linger but humans constantly make war. Your theme is a good one for a poem.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2018

Comment from nassus1957
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I salute poets like you who can pack such a strong message in to few words. And you were very effective in carrying out your message for the readers. Yes, I agree, we sacrifice freedom with the aggressive tension and conflict among different warring factions. In the end, the nation is the ultimate victim. All the best.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2018

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This six word poetry contest entry speaks what is freedom and how one attains in course of living and it is well expressed; wish you good luck in the contest. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2018

Comment from mvbrooks
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Interesting choice of 6 words with freedom coming as a result of yielding. At first read, freedom and yielding seemed opposite forces. Thought about it--and being able to yield from "constant battle' would offer a respite of some freedom. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2018

Comment from zekeziemann
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Like my recent post, I wonder if we are too "pie in the sky"? But we keep praying and listening to the Almighty GOd who protects us.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2018

Comment from Jeff Michaux
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This posting has nice artwork. It clearly depicts the content of the poem. Well written piece that I enjoyed immensely. Keep up the good work as I look for more from your name.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2018

Comment from lyenochka
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True. I like this six word poem as it shows the tension between "yielding" and "battle" and it works both on a world level and on a personal level where one can give grace and yield instead of battling.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

Comment from Thomas Bowling
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A sad but true commentary. This s excellent. A profound statement in six words. I believe you will do well in the contest. It's the best I've read so far. Good luck.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018