We would Follow
If Government could show us29 total reviews
Comment from Bichon
A good short poem with a strong meaning. The photo made me giggle too. Best of luck in the contest with this great entry my friend.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
A good short poem with a strong meaning. The photo made me giggle too. Best of luck in the contest with this great entry my friend.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yeah; we could pedal their proposed bills and laws all over our communities as well as on Capitol Hill.
But, alas. They have chosen not to do do (they being the lazy, sneaky politicians, of course).
What're ya gonna do, kahpot?
~Dean
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
Yeah; we could pedal their proposed bills and laws all over our communities as well as on Capitol Hill.
But, alas. They have chosen not to do do (they being the lazy, sneaky politicians, of course).
What're ya gonna do, kahpot?
~Dean
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you and I guess we just keep on hoping****kahpot
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I guess...
Comment from artemis53
Well done and I like the 'attitude.' I am not a fan of restrictions such as the government is today. Wasn't it about freedom? If it was, they are completely missing the target and perhaps they should be the target ;-)
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
Well done and I like the 'attitude.' I am not a fan of restrictions such as the government is today. Wasn't it about freedom? If it was, they are completely missing the target and perhaps they should be the target ;-)
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you and yes exactly****kahpot
Comment from BOO ghost
Too much corruption in government and politics. Man is greedy. Why they take land from Indians. tax - tax - tax. That is their belief. Picture is mysterious looking. Like it. Simplicity of the times of the Old West would be best. Nice poem. BOO-tastic!
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
Too much corruption in government and politics. Man is greedy. Why they take land from Indians. tax - tax - tax. That is their belief. Picture is mysterious looking. Like it. Simplicity of the times of the Old West would be best. Nice poem. BOO-tastic!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you my friend****kahpot
Comment from sfharper
Enjoyable short poem that says something important about the relationship between government and all the rest of us. The photo seems quite fitting. Perhaps we are all aliens in our own land.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
Enjoyable short poem that says something important about the relationship between government and all the rest of us. The photo seems quite fitting. Perhaps we are all aliens in our own land.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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You are welcome kahpot
Comment from B.B. Rose
They haven't got a clue to even this most basic of life skills. Then, even if they did, they wouldn't show us how to do it unless they could put a tax on it or have it regulated by the Occcupational Health and Safety Organization (OSHA). Don't hold your breath that we can do anything except peddle as fast as we can to the voting booth to rid ourselves of these self-serving "servants."
Best regards. B.B. Rose
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
They haven't got a clue to even this most basic of life skills. Then, even if they did, they wouldn't show us how to do it unless they could put a tax on it or have it regulated by the Occcupational Health and Safety Organization (OSHA). Don't hold your breath that we can do anything except peddle as fast as we can to the voting booth to rid ourselves of these self-serving "servants."
Best regards. B.B. Rose
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you and I agree, I would not be able to peddle fast enough****kahpot
Comment from Liberty Justice
Like the way you state: "We could peddle their certification. With so much turmoil and indecision going on in the government, I understand why you wrote this poem which has an allusion to our government. NICE! lol liberty justice
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
Like the way you state: "We could peddle their certification. With so much turmoil and indecision going on in the government, I understand why you wrote this poem which has an allusion to our government. NICE! lol liberty justice
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from TAB_that's me
Your short poem has the perfect number of syllables. I agree, the government needs to go back to elementary school and learn the basics again.
teresa
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
Your short poem has the perfect number of syllables. I agree, the government needs to go back to elementary school and learn the basics again.
teresa
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Cedar
I certainly agree with your thoughts on your short poem entry. Our world is like a stick of dynamite right now, it could explode at any time. And all the citizens can do is hope and pray that it never does. Good luck...Bill
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
I certainly agree with your thoughts on your short poem entry. Our world is like a stick of dynamite right now, it could explode at any time. And all the citizens can do is hope and pray that it never does. Good luck...Bill
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
We could peddle ...Their certification. I am terrified about the world powers right now especially American and North Korea. It is like a tinder box waiting to go off. Egos so big they think of nothing but their own pleasure. A very apt poem good luck in the competition. Kind regards Meia xx
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
We could peddle ...Their certification. I am terrified about the world powers right now especially American and North Korea. It is like a tinder box waiting to go off. Egos so big they think of nothing but their own pleasure. A very apt poem good luck in the competition. Kind regards Meia xx
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you and yes it must be quite frightening for your country ( and all)****kahpot