Unleashed Chaos
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Hidden Away"A Novel of the Breedline Series
6 total reviews
Comment from Natali Holden
If I'm reading a book online like this, sometimes I forget it will eventually end. A novel I was reading in here recently was completed and I was like what?! I guess holding a book in your hand can help and you can see how much you have left to read. This feels like there's going to be 100 chapters. But I can tell you, if there are, I'll continue reading. This novel is so awesome! Keep up the good work!
Natali ;)
p.s. Please don't actually have there be 100+ chapters.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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If I'm reading a book online like this, sometimes I forget it will eventually end. A novel I was reading in here recently was completed and I was like what?! I guess holding a book in your hand can help and you can see how much you have left to read. This feels like there's going to be 100 chapters. But I can tell you, if there are, I'll continue reading. This novel is so awesome! Keep up the good work!
Natali ;)
p.s. Please don't actually have there be 100+ chapters.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Thank you, dear Natali :)
Your kind words made my day. I know what you mean about finding that good book you can't put down but you know it will eventually end. Well... my book doesn't have 100 chapters. Lol! It does have 55 though. After this book, there will be a fourth that continues where this one ends. I'm currently on chapter 31. The new series I'm working on will be my best out of all the others.
I'm grateful for your support. I don't have a lot of people following my story, but you make up for it!
Thanks so much!
Shana :)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Another intense chapter.
Characters remain strong. The story is easy to understand.
Your footnotes are fantastic.
Thank you for sharing this.'
Sharon
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Another intense chapter.
Characters remain strong. The story is easy to understand.
Your footnotes are fantastic.
Thank you for sharing this.'
Sharon
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Thank you, Sharon :)
Good to hear from you again! I'm glad you enjoyed another adventure of the Breedline. Stay tuned... lots more to come.
All my best,
Shana :)
Comment from royowen
What a marvellous episode Shana, so well detailed and expressed. So Jace had been spirited away by the Arch Angel Raphael, although heaven knows why. And brought back to the covenant, it quite obviously.happened for a reason, which I guess we'll find out later. Poor Tessa has been drugged and she hits Thomas, only to be bashed herself. She can turn into a pretty fearsome creature herself. Well done, great episode dear friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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What a marvellous episode Shana, so well detailed and expressed. So Jace had been spirited away by the Arch Angel Raphael, although heaven knows why. And brought back to the covenant, it quite obviously.happened for a reason, which I guess we'll find out later. Poor Tessa has been drugged and she hits Thomas, only to be bashed herself. She can turn into a pretty fearsome creature herself. Well done, great episode dear friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thank you my dear friend :)
Yes, Jace mysteriously vanished before he turned into his Beast. Maybe Raphael had something to do with that... hmmm? There is a reason why the Arch Angel has cat-like features. Remember the cat Buddy? There might be something about that cat that stays in the Covenant. :)
I know Tessa has been through a lot, but God doesn't give us what we cannot handle. She is strong.
Thanks again, Roy. I truly enjoy your feedback. You're the best!
Always your fan,
Shana :)
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Well done dear Shana
Comment from ngage
The photo caught my eye right off the bat, and then your chapter blew me away Shana. Fantastic writing! You never disappoint me. I am buying all of your novels right now! I will still follow you here in fanstory.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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The photo caught my eye right off the bat, and then your chapter blew me away Shana. Fantastic writing! You never disappoint me. I am buying all of your novels right now! I will still follow you here in fanstory.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thank you, ngage :)
Your feedback is something I look forward to. And thank you for supporting me. I hope you enjoy the books. Big hugs from Arkansas!
Shana :)
Comment from apky
Oh heavens, another first rate artwork that really caught my eye!
Followed by a magnificent chapter once more. I'm so relieved Jace is all right, and Tessa, too, is still alive despite being drugged and hit by Sebastian's twin.
I so look forward to the next post!
she smoothed over the roundness as if she was trying to sooth(soothe; sooth has a different meaning altogether!) her babies.
Moments after a long embrace, she raised her head so she could look him in the eyes(,) so she could see the light of good shining through them.
the agony in his body and the screaming in his head were too painful (for him) to be dead. ~ It wasn't the agony and the screaming that seemed dead, it was him.
"I know your(you're) worried, Mom, but please have faith,"
Ever fondly,
Aki
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Oh heavens, another first rate artwork that really caught my eye!
Followed by a magnificent chapter once more. I'm so relieved Jace is all right, and Tessa, too, is still alive despite being drugged and hit by Sebastian's twin.
I so look forward to the next post!
she smoothed over the roundness as if she was trying to sooth(soothe; sooth has a different meaning altogether!) her babies.
Moments after a long embrace, she raised her head so she could look him in the eyes(,) so she could see the light of good shining through them.
the agony in his body and the screaming in his head were too painful (for him) to be dead. ~ It wasn't the agony and the screaming that seemed dead, it was him.
"I know your(you're) worried, Mom, but please have faith,"
Ever fondly,
Aki
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much! :)
So glad you enjoyed the photo I placed with this chapter. I get so much from the website I'm on. Beautiful pictures and artwork of wolves. I love them all!
You do such a great favor for me catching my mistakes. I just had a editor finish with this chapter, and she caught the same things you did. Great pair of eyes. I do need them! LOL!
Thanks again for your support and fabulous advice. You're the best!
Your fan,
Shana :)
Comment from Paul Bownas
I thought this was extremely well written, it has an almost professional tone to it. My only problem was working out who all the characters were, but with your concise footnote, it was all explained. Very well written and very good, and this from someone who isn't into fantasy or sci-fi at all!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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I thought this was extremely well written, it has an almost professional tone to it. My only problem was working out who all the characters were, but with your concise footnote, it was all explained. Very well written and very good, and this from someone who isn't into fantasy or sci-fi at all!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Wow! Thank you! :)
Your feedback just made my day! You give me confidence to keep writing my adventures of the Breedline series.
Hope to hear from you again.
Shana :)
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It was my pleasure Shana, and I hope to see more of your work.
