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Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very nicely composed romance poem. It goes beyond romance, though, and speaks to me of reincarnation and soul remembrance. Good rhyming throughout. Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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This is a very nicely composed romance poem. It goes beyond romance, though, and speaks to me of reincarnation and soul remembrance. Good rhyming throughout. Marilyn
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Comment from mrsmajor
Beautifully written using rhymed quatrain verses..there's so many ways to describe the joys of romance, and you have used language that gives this poem special meaning...from the first verse to the last...It was a pleasure...Thanks for sharing...
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Beautifully written using rhymed quatrain verses..there's so many ways to describe the joys of romance, and you have used language that gives this poem special meaning...from the first verse to the last...It was a pleasure...Thanks for sharing...
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 30-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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You're quite welcome, it was my pleasure!
Comment from Mark Schardine
My soul begins to soar
Like it has times before
"times before"? Yes, I but each time you show a new perspective, not just a variation on a theme. There are many poems to come.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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My soul begins to soar
Like it has times before
"times before"? Yes, I but each time you show a new perspective, not just a variation on a theme. There are many poems to come.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is such a beautiful and very romantic poem, my friend, and it flowed so smoothly. Wonderfully done. The picture you added is lovely as well. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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This is such a beautiful and very romantic poem, my friend, and it flowed so smoothly. Wonderfully done. The picture you added is lovely as well. ~Kerry
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Comment from dragonpoet
These aabb quatrains tell of an unrequited love. A fantasy of perfect romantic love.
Perfect choice of artwork to illustrate the words.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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These aabb quatrains tell of an unrequited love. A fantasy of perfect romantic love.
Perfect choice of artwork to illustrate the words.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and romantic poem you have penned my friend. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work and your words. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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This is a very beautiful and romantic poem you have penned my friend. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work and your words. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello and smiles to you fastdigits soon as I saw the picture you picked for your love poem I for some reason felt the magical beauty in your thoughts about you dream
Gert
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Hello and smiles to you fastdigits soon as I saw the picture you picked for your love poem I for some reason felt the magical beauty in your thoughts about you dream
Gert
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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You are welcome fastdigits
Gert
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello fastdigits, once again, you bring the magic of the night to life again. I really liked your opening verse. It set the tone of the poem very nicely, especially:
Of thoughts that I fantasize
Places I see before my eyes
(The essence of this poem)
I also liked:
We crossed the steep ridge of time
Our love never wavering in the climb
The whispered words we said
Forever in my head
(No one can take a person's memory or dreams away.)
fd, your last verse ends the poem with the feeling of ahh - very nice. Good rhyming, especially ... kissed and exist. Wonderful complementary artwork choice. A poem of love that dances in the night.
My afterthought. And so ...
The shadows of yesterday
glitter with the stars above --
one vision more brilliant
than all the others,
but all of them remain
in the warmth of my heart
~ Forevermore ~ LB
And that's all she wrote. fd, your poem is romantically penned and is filled with good descriptive writing and imagery. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Hello fastdigits, once again, you bring the magic of the night to life again. I really liked your opening verse. It set the tone of the poem very nicely, especially:
Of thoughts that I fantasize
Places I see before my eyes
(The essence of this poem)
I also liked:
We crossed the steep ridge of time
Our love never wavering in the climb
The whispered words we said
Forever in my head
(No one can take a person's memory or dreams away.)
fd, your last verse ends the poem with the feeling of ahh - very nice. Good rhyming, especially ... kissed and exist. Wonderful complementary artwork choice. A poem of love that dances in the night.
My afterthought. And so ...
The shadows of yesterday
glitter with the stars above --
one vision more brilliant
than all the others,
but all of them remain
in the warmth of my heart
~ Forevermore ~ LB
And that's all she wrote. fd, your poem is romantically penned and is filled with good descriptive writing and imagery. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Comment from ronnie k
What a write, this kind of poems are the reason that I write, each line so controlled and speaks 'I AM POETRY" my first love was roses are red, this poem is so far from the simple poem yet so close in rhyme movement, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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What a write, this kind of poems are the reason that I write, each line so controlled and speaks 'I AM POETRY" my first love was roses are red, this poem is so far from the simple poem yet so close in rhyme movement, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A serene and mystical write with romantic sparkle with a touch of magic. Our dreams can be filled with sweet memories until the dawn, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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A serene and mystical write with romantic sparkle with a touch of magic. Our dreams can be filled with sweet memories until the dawn, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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