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A Tanka on Lost Youth7 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
A very good tanka poem portraying a very poignant message in so few words. I love the illustration that you have chosen. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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A very good tanka poem portraying a very poignant message in so few words. I love the illustration that you have chosen. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your kind consideration!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Nice tanka about aging and coming to terms with the loss of youth. I agree with you. What else can we do? Good job and good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Hello my friend
Nice tanka about aging and coming to terms with the loss of youth. I agree with you. What else can we do? Good job and good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thank you! You change what you can and accept what you can't. Less stress and mire joy...
Comment from Mimi Linny
Nicely done Tanka piece of poetry on lost ages of our lives. Smoothly written and metered to create a nice flow that is easy to read. Great job and much luck in the writing prompt contest!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Nicely done Tanka piece of poetry on lost ages of our lives. Smoothly written and metered to create a nice flow that is easy to read. Great job and much luck in the writing prompt contest!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your insights!
Comment from Cybertron1986
The beginning was very touching as you connected nature with the changes which occur within our lives. In a way, this poem perfectly compared us to being a part of the cycle of nature. I found that very touching. Beautiful
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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The beginning was very touching as you connected nature with the changes which occur within our lives. In a way, this poem perfectly compared us to being a part of the cycle of nature. I found that very touching. Beautiful
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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So glad you could picture what I tried to convey!
Comment from Kaye Ouston
You have nailed this. It is well written and I think all of us can relate to the imagery that it paints. Growing older is a work in progress but sweet memories of lost youth help ease us into the changing seasons of future life.
Good luck with your entry
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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You have nailed this. It is well written and I think all of us can relate to the imagery that it paints. Growing older is a work in progress but sweet memories of lost youth help ease us into the changing seasons of future life.
Good luck with your entry
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your insights!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good Tanka poem.
Yes, our youth does fleet, doesn't it?
I'm beyond the autumn myself and what I don't understand is where are the Golden Years that they promised us.
Maybe there is a poem in there.
Sharon
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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A good Tanka poem.
Yes, our youth does fleet, doesn't it?
I'm beyond the autumn myself and what I don't understand is where are the Golden Years that they promised us.
Maybe there is a poem in there.
Sharon
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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I hear you - the only golden thing I see are the leaves - that we end up raking! Thank you for dropping to read and review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your Tanka for the contest. Your words are hauntingly beautiful. I enjoyed your presentation and the passage of time,
~patty~
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your Tanka for the contest. Your words are hauntingly beautiful. I enjoyed your presentation and the passage of time,
~patty~
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging feedback!
