This ad annoys both of us.
I will write my first ever script.16 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your write.
and your words captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your write.
and your words captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice day.
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You're very welcome.
Until next time.
Cookie
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
(If) you want one
The last paragraph is very confusing and I feel needs to be rewritten to understand it better. The line before the scooter line.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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(If) you want one
The last paragraph is very confusing and I feel needs to be rewritten to understand it better. The line before the scooter line.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice day. I will try tomorrow.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about rewriting and redesigning the words and slogan for this advertisement on assignment but for which the author took an action and bought in a different product; I liked.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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This speaks about rewriting and redesigning the words and slogan for this advertisement on assignment but for which the author took an action and bought in a different product; I liked.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice day.
Comment from c_lucas
Ads can be misleading, or even an outright fraudulent. Be careful what you ask for, you just might get it. Your rewrite shows humor. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Ads can be misleading, or even an outright fraudulent. Be careful what you ask for, you just might get it. Your rewrite shows humor. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice day.
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You are welcome, Ine. Charlie
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Very funny and very well written. This was very funny and highly amusing. I really like the idea of this comp. Brilliant fun well done I really laughed at the animal mess that they smell of lol I am just a child at heart and those things amuse me lol kindest regards Meia xx
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Very funny and very well written. This was very funny and highly amusing. I really like the idea of this comp. Brilliant fun well done I really laughed at the animal mess that they smell of lol I am just a child at heart and those things amuse me lol kindest regards Meia xx
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice day.
Comment from royowen
I think you're generally right Ine. Quite often one will pay good money, when the product simply isn't worth the cost, but people can be "sucked in" to purchasing products because of either...good marketing, or simply, undeserved reputation. Well done Ine, good scribing. Blessings, Roy
Typo : I phoned her (ones) about an offer. Once?
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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I think you're generally right Ine. Quite often one will pay good money, when the product simply isn't worth the cost, but people can be "sucked in" to purchasing products because of either...good marketing, or simply, undeserved reputation. Well done Ine, good scribing. Blessings, Roy
Typo : I phoned her (ones) about an offer. Once?
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice day.
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Most.welcome
