Lyrics Make The Song
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Comment from Ricky1024
Interesting to read how you write the ABBA lyrics and quite complicated when I write my pieces of when it comes to music I don't know how to read music so course there's no symbols but the words are they are with Melodies and a course I was told by somebody who promoted entertainments after he wants that might what are you read one of my phone's it sounds like it would make for a good song that's where I started writing and turning poetry in the songs never sold one yet though but I think some of them are quite good for like almost an angel Madonna would love and then there's another one based on many many songs by The Rolling Stones
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Interesting to read how you write the ABBA lyrics and quite complicated when I write my pieces of when it comes to music I don't know how to read music so course there's no symbols but the words are they are with Melodies and a course I was told by somebody who promoted entertainments after he wants that might what are you read one of my phone's it sounds like it would make for a good song that's where I started writing and turning poetry in the songs never sold one yet though but I think some of them are quite good for like almost an angel Madonna would love and then there's another one based on many many songs by The Rolling Stones
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thanks.
If the spirit so moves you, I invite you to join us at Lyrics Make The Song.
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thanks Brett it after I read this I was actually walking along as I was reviewing on a cell phone earpiece and then I started to produce a song and then I couldn't get the words out of my head and I kept adding to it adding to it and now I forgot it but it'll come back so give me the details how to join the lyrics plug Club thanks talk to Ricky 1024
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A very informative music piece.
I enjoy these with so much knowledge to share.
I look forward to reading more of these.
And the picture does in fact go nicely with your article.
Sharon
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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A very informative music piece.
I enjoy these with so much knowledge to share.
I look forward to reading more of these.
And the picture does in fact go nicely with your article.
Sharon
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thank you.
While I may occasionally post articles of this nature as this one was, I intend to keep the vast majority of them posted in the threads of the Lyrics Make The Song club.
So, if the spirit so moves you, I invite you to join the club. It is easy to do.
All you have to do is go to the blue line at the top of the page when you sign into FanStory.
Then, click on Community.
After that, click on Clubs, and you will find us.
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I would like to join for interest sake.
Does it matter if I would not be an active participant?
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Come join us. :)
Comment from schatzling
Once again I thank you for utilizing my collage to accompany your article...This collage seems to do quite well for your club announcements and articles...feel free to continue utilizing it over and over again (smile).....
Am learning so much from you...thank you for your writing and here and all the information within it.
It is not confusing so I compliment you on that especially....
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Once again I thank you for utilizing my collage to accompany your article...This collage seems to do quite well for your club announcements and articles...feel free to continue utilizing it over and over again (smile).....
Am learning so much from you...thank you for your writing and here and all the information within it.
It is not confusing so I compliment you on that especially....
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Glad you enjoyed the article.
If the spirit so moves you, I invite you to join the Lyrics Make The Song club.
Appreciate the use of your picture and plan to keep using it.
The collage does seem to fit my songwriting postings rather well.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
You've shown me some things I didn't know about songwriting. The trick is to write all of this and not make it seem forced. Some examples would be helpful.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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You've shown me some things I didn't know about songwriting. The trick is to write all of this and not make it seem forced. Some examples would be helpful.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this posting.
Examples are a good idea.
If the spirit so moves you, I invite you to join Lyrics Make The Song.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I know there is a proper way to do song lyrics and I have tried this way , but it just does not work for me for some reason . My hat goes off to you for what you are doing
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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I know there is a proper way to do song lyrics and I have tried this way , but it just does not work for me for some reason . My hat goes off to you for what you are doing
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this posting.
Most certainly would welcome you as a member of Lyrics Make the Song.
Therefore, I invite you to join us.
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your write.
And how they are mounted on the wall,
Unlike you I no nothing about music, yet I found your read to be very interesting.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your write.
And how they are mounted on the wall,
Unlike you I no nothing about music, yet I found your read to be very interesting.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Thanks, and if the spirit moves you I invite you to join the Lyrics Make The Song club misscookie.
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You're very welcome.
Can you tell me more about this club I'm might want to give it a try. until next time.
Cookie
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Come join us misscookie. We will talk about everything music. If you want to submit your own lyrics, or songs, please do. If you just want to learn more about music that's okay too. Would like to have you in the club. :)
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Thank you for the invite
Cookie
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written informative piece about how to write song lyrics. I hope to learn the art of song writing. I an sure it can be learned from a great master of the art himself.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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A very well-written informative piece about how to write song lyrics. I hope to learn the art of song writing. I an sure it can be learned from a great master of the art himself.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Thanks, and if the spirit so moves you, I would invite you to join our club.
Comment from apky
This certainly had all the trademark of a Brett Mathew West write.
It read like the gourmet musical recipe for musicians who will no doubt understand all the technicalities and artistry better than I can.
Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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This certainly had all the trademark of a Brett Mathew West write.
It read like the gourmet musical recipe for musicians who will no doubt understand all the technicalities and artistry better than I can.
Well done.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Thanks, and if the spirit so moves you then I invite you to join the Lyrics Make The Song club.
Comment from Bill Schott
This so reminds me of sitting in with my wife and her choir practice. The jargon goes on and on and everyone nods and replies with more of the same words that may as well be Swahili. This might be a surprise for her if I actually joined the conversation with a meaningful suggestion. Then, with another fifty years of music training I might be able to contribute.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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This so reminds me of sitting in with my wife and her choir practice. The jargon goes on and on and everyone nods and replies with more of the same words that may as well be Swahili. This might be a surprise for her if I actually joined the conversation with a meaningful suggestion. Then, with another fifty years of music training I might be able to contribute.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Meaningful suggestions are welcome in the Lyrics Make The Song club. Each of us helping one another out. That is what the club is all about. Therefore, if the spirit so moves you then I invite you to join the club.
Comment from rama devi
EXCELLENT SHARE. INFORMATIVE AND INTERESTING. LUCIDLY ARTICULATED. GOOD FLOW AND STRUCTURE. Oops! caps lock. Sorry!
Anyway, just noticed one spag nit:
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You will find that 64 bars only marginally affects the overall scheme of the lyric.
bars is plural so the verb should not have an 's' affect, not affects
Warmest Smiles,
rd
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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EXCELLENT SHARE. INFORMATIVE AND INTERESTING. LUCIDLY ARTICULATED. GOOD FLOW AND STRUCTURE. Oops! caps lock. Sorry!
Anyway, just noticed one spag nit:
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You will find that 64 bars only marginally affects the overall scheme of the lyric.
bars is plural so the verb should not have an 's' affect, not affects
Warmest Smiles,
rd
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Appreciate the catch, and if the spirit so moves you then I invite you to join us in the Lyrics Make The Song club.
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Thanks - no extra time...but I appreciate the invite. Blessings, rd
