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Thoughts from the dark side

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Comment from Katie Keeler
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I really liked this poem. I also really enjoyed your connections to God, or at least that's what it sounded like. It flowed very smoothly, and the words were chosen well. Very good job.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
    It is part two of a previous poem
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks about the existence of God that we find in strands of time the infinity as our life is nothing but eternity of time in which we live there is message of God is always there; I liked.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
    i wrote a poem called. Time Is A Run On Sentence. This is really the conclusion of the poem.

    Norm