Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Excellent six word poem that describes a yummy lunch. Your use of words is clever and makes the reader want some lunch. I wish you well in the contest with this unique poem.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. have a blessed day!

brigitte

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This One-line poem, Wrap-sody, covers the format, uses a homophone rhyme, and makes a play on words that works well. I don't know what ;'indites' means. I'm thinking ... indicts ?

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017

Indite-archaic to compose or build. Thank you for reading and reviewing. This was fun to write.

Fan Friend,
Brigitte

Comment from Cedar

Excellent

Just looking at your presentation picture makes me want to get up and run to the frig. It really does look delightful.

I wish you good luck in this short one-liner contest...Bill

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017

Thank you very much for reading. This was a fun one to write.

FanFriend,
Brigitte

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

Thanks for your wrap tribute. For me I want a killer Cuban restaurant with a giant cigar bar. Then give me a Cuban sandwich. That's just like heaven to me. I'm a simple man.
All the best...
Bill~

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017

I love it. Some appetites are satiated differently, to each his own. thank you for reading and reviewing.

Blessings,
brigitte

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

I'll have to remember this one for the Christmas leftovers! We've always plenty of spinach in the garden, too. Sounds as if a smidgeon of cranberry sauce would top it off nicely!

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017

I believe it would. Thank you for reading and reviewing. This was fun to write.

Fan Friend,
Brigitte

Comment from smileycloud

Excellent

this is quite lovely
very sweet and special kind of poem and certainly meets the prompt requirements
have a smiley day

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Happy Monday,
Brigitte

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your one liner "Wrap-sody". It sounds delicious, though I have never come across one.
All the best in the contest.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. This was a fun write.
Blessings,
Brigitte

reply by marybell1 on 14-Nov-2017

You are most welcome.
Marybell1.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Yes this photo combined with these wonderful words, make this poem is excellent very well done, hard to write a poem in one line, but you have done very well****kahpot

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017

It was s challenge and became a fun write. Glad you liked it.
Blessings,
Brigitte

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Put a little Munster cheese on that and you've got something. What time is lunch? I'll bring the soda. Diet of course. No need to ruin this healthy lunch. Very well written six-word contest entry.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. bring the light mayo,please.

Blessings,
Brigitte

Comment from sue133

Excellent

A great play on words and a clever one line poem. I looked at entering but thought it was too difficult! You have managed it really well, and slipped in a rhyme. Well done. Sue

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017

Thank you very much. This was my first attempt at a one liner. It was fun to write.

Blessings,
Brigitte