Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Dear Anonymous Poet;
Thank you for sharing your entry in the Spiritual five-seven-five poetry contest. Yes, indeed; there is a problem when churches are being run as businesses and God has somehow been kicked out as CEO.

~patty~

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017

Thanks for reading and critique zanya

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

The spiritual 575 piece is based on the spirit and the spirit of money capitalism exist today in all states in all countries in this sorry world it's all about the Mighty Dollar the mighty ruble the steckel speckle and Penny of life they come to our house and collect our garbage they pump our sewerage away and Supply us with water they protect us and in all in all we paid dearly for this with taxes to our house as soon as we need them sometimes they run away like a mouse but when they want to punish us we have to go in front of the judge and pay our dues this is the way capitalism rules wonderfully written thanks dr. Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017

Thanks for reading and critique zanya