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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from nomi338
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How about their being ugly as hell. Why do they look like pigs? Ugh, this is almost enough to turn me off pork. I will admit however, that as I detest ants, they do me a favor by gobbling up those pesky little buggers.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
    Thanks, nomi for checking out Aaron and Amy.
Comment from damommy
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Well, there goes the neighborhood.

I wondered when you'd get around to aardvarks. Should be very interesting. 8-)

Strange looking animals should provide you with a lot of ammunition.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
    Thanks, da
Comment from lyenochka
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Fun poem with a surprisingly cute picture. They look quite different from armadillos.
Guess they aren't popular in any ant neighborhood but they seem harmless otherwise.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
    Thanks lyenochka
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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Such funny looking creatures. The picture tells the story.
Thanks for sharing your 5-7-5 poem (or double 5-7-5) about Aardvarks.
Well done.
Sharon

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
    Thanks, Sharon
Comment from closetpoetjester
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LOL Well I guess an aardvark with an overextensive bit of mouth muscle WOULD be considered as a nuclear threat to the ant and other such tiny ground dwelling yummy tasting insects.

Yep, that's gonna level 'em haha

LOVE your sense of humour. It's clearly down the anthole haha or perhaps on the tip of the tongue of that absolutely gorgeous specimen of creature.

P

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
    Thanks P