Looking through the window of love
Love's window is always clear15 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
As usual you write with heart, my friend. I guess this one was written after the image, but good to see the quality of interpretation, for such is the beauty of words.
Nicely done.
Have a good day.
RG
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
As usual you write with heart, my friend. I guess this one was written after the image, but good to see the quality of interpretation, for such is the beauty of words.
Nicely done.
Have a good day.
RG
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Actually this one was written before the image was found which is very unusual for me I must say
Thanks as always for the review Roy.
dip
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Even better then... fits very well.
Bravo
Comment from robyn corum
The window of love is so clear
I look out to the world through the pane
Knowing you'll always be near
Beautiful memories will always remain
Awww... how sweet. I don't know if this is entirely fiction or if it's honest truth, but it seems real enough. *smile* Seems to be a forget-me-not letter to someone you loved and lost, through the wages of life or by death. Interesting and sweet! Thank you!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
The window of love is so clear
I look out to the world through the pane
Knowing you'll always be near
Beautiful memories will always remain
Awww... how sweet. I don't know if this is entirely fiction or if it's honest truth, but it seems real enough. *smile* Seems to be a forget-me-not letter to someone you loved and lost, through the wages of life or by death. Interesting and sweet! Thank you!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thanks so much Robyn. Always appreciate your input
dip
Comment from Sharon Haiste
What a lovely and sad poem.
It starts so full of promise then turns blue.
Well done, good rhyming.
Another good one.
Sharon
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
What a lovely and sad poem.
It starts so full of promise then turns blue.
Well done, good rhyming.
Another good one.
Sharon
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thanks so much Sharon i am glad you liked it
dip
Comment from Pantygynt
The windoe of love is a lovely metaphor and one I haven't met before. A window lets the light in and when opened the breeze passes through as well. The drawing of the ccurtains signifying loss are reminiscent of the tradition of drawing the curtains in a house where a death has occurred. This is another good one.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
The windoe of love is a lovely metaphor and one I haven't met before. A window lets the light in and when opened the breeze passes through as well. The drawing of the ccurtains signifying loss are reminiscent of the tradition of drawing the curtains in a house where a death has occurred. This is another good one.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thanks so much Jim I always feel good when you like my poems I feel like a happy student lol
Seriously i really appreciate your comments and input
dip
Comment from TAB_that's me
I love the picture of looking through the window of love and seeing the reflection of the one you love:)
Such a wonderful love poem:)
teresa
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
I love the picture of looking through the window of love and seeing the reflection of the one you love:)
Such a wonderful love poem:)
teresa
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much Teresa You always make me feel good about my poetry
dip
Comment from Teri7
Dip, Thank you for sharing your favorite window with us. You used very good descriptive wording as always which gave great imagery! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
Dip, Thank you for sharing your favorite window with us. You used very good descriptive wording as always which gave great imagery! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you Teri I always appreciate your comments
dip
Comment from patcelaw
Dip, this is a well written poem. The flow is good, the rhyming is natural and not forced. Many blessings for a great weekend. Patricia
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
Dip, this is a well written poem. The flow is good, the rhyming is natural and not forced. Many blessings for a great weekend. Patricia
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thanks as always Pat. I am glad you enjoyed it.
dip
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
BEAUTIFLY WRITTEN MY FRIEND
I LOVE HOW YOU WRITE OF LOVE
I LOVE THE WINDOW PANE PART
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
BEAUTIFLY WRITTEN MY FRIEND
I LOVE HOW YOU WRITE OF LOVE
I LOVE THE WINDOW PANE PART
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thanks as always Abby, you always uplift me with your wonderful comments
dip
Comment from Heather Knight
When I read the author's notes, I chuckled. I knew this had to be your favorite window.
You have reflected several emotions related to love here, including sadness and I like that.
Thanks for sharing another lovely poem.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
When I read the author's notes, I chuckled. I knew this had to be your favorite window.
You have reflected several emotions related to love here, including sadness and I like that.
Thanks for sharing another lovely poem.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Hehe I am glad you enjoyed it Maria The window of love is the best window in the house
dip
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning again, DIP: The window of love, Okay! Your notes say, "My favorite window!" I thought about this and I could relate to this. There is a favorite window in my room that i used to stare out of when I was thinking of my love, wishing him well. I guess I could call this my window of love. NICE!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
Good morning again, DIP: The window of love, Okay! Your notes say, "My favorite window!" I thought about this and I could relate to this. There is a favorite window in my room that i used to stare out of when I was thinking of my love, wishing him well. I guess I could call this my window of love. NICE!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thanks again Tier I always appreciate your comments
dip