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Comment from H. Rebecca
"And, the he bit her on her neck...
typo
I am well aware that this is meant to get people thinking, but it also may rub some the wrong way.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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"And, the he bit her on her neck...
typo
I am well aware that this is meant to get people thinking, but it also may rub some the wrong way.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Only if you have bad kittens dr. Ricky 10:24 thanks
Comment from apky
Hello Doc,
You have taken time to write about these very evil stuff using first humour, then facts and figures and naming the culprits. Bravo, my friend!
Oh, poor Kitty.
But who wouldn't want some Greenies,
And all for Foodies and Treaties and lickie Lickies!
A pity that Kitty had to be punished,
But seven Hail Kitties aint climbing Mt Everest.
A week in your romm with no Treaties is harder, though!
"And, the(then) he bit her on her neck...
"Like your brother's, Blackie and Midnight?" ~ remove the apostrophe in bother's
"How you been and what have you been up (to)?"
Great humour in the following lines, I LMAO!
"Nine, Hail Marys and Nine Hail Kitties!"
"And, no Lickie, Lickies, or Treaties, or Foodies...
"For three months!"
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"And, you better not have any diseases!"
"But Daddy?"
"In your room, NOW!"
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Hello Doc,
You have taken time to write about these very evil stuff using first humour, then facts and figures and naming the culprits. Bravo, my friend!
Oh, poor Kitty.
But who wouldn't want some Greenies,
And all for Foodies and Treaties and lickie Lickies!
A pity that Kitty had to be punished,
But seven Hail Kitties aint climbing Mt Everest.
A week in your romm with no Treaties is harder, though!
"And, the(then) he bit her on her neck...
"Like your brother's, Blackie and Midnight?" ~ remove the apostrophe in bother's
"How you been and what have you been up (to)?"
Great humour in the following lines, I LMAO!
"Nine, Hail Marys and Nine Hail Kitties!"
"And, no Lickie, Lickies, or Treaties, or Foodies...
"For three months!"
...
"And, you better not have any diseases!"
"But Daddy?"
"In your room, NOW!"
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Hi APK why this has to be one of my cleverest cutest and humorous pieces I've ever created all from the imagination of a genius and not Walt Disney from above dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from teols2016
Well, this is different...in a good way. Personifying our society's problems through kitties is orginal and your piece will stick out more because of it. Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Well, this is different...in a good way. Personifying our society's problems through kitties is orginal and your piece will stick out more because of it. Well done.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Thanks tolls 2016 for your nice and kind thoughts and review dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Bob Stanton
Interesting rant, and I generally speaking agree with the content. ITO writing I almost lost the plot and stopped reading after all the kitty litter as it made little sense to me as an analogy , but kept going to see if it had a decent point at the end, which it kind of did.
My other concern is that it states the problems without suggesting any solutions; therefore just a moan.
Now if you were using it to start a movement, then that would be quite another thing.
Have a good one.
Cheers.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Interesting rant, and I generally speaking agree with the content. ITO writing I almost lost the plot and stopped reading after all the kitty litter as it made little sense to me as an analogy , but kept going to see if it had a decent point at the end, which it kind of did.
My other concern is that it states the problems without suggesting any solutions; therefore just a moan.
Now if you were using it to start a movement, then that would be quite another thing.
Have a good one.
Cheers.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Hey Bob thanks for your review even though I believe it's worth more than good and it wasn't a rant it's actually a as it was listed philosophy if you read the notes and what exactly wrong with this Earth today which I'm sure you agree on thanks dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
LOVE IT RICKY PUSS THATS FUNNY
I'M GLAD TO SEE YOUR WRITTING
IS BACK AND A SGREAT AS IT WAS BEFORE
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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LOVE IT RICKY PUSS THATS FUNNY
I'M GLAD TO SEE YOUR WRITTING
IS BACK AND A SGREAT AS IT WAS BEFORE
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thanks Abby this was originally titled the pureness of evil and then when I started to think about using several of my kittens going out on the street and meeting up with other big cats and being bad that's what I actually spelled it wrong to wasn't spelled pure it was spelled p u r e but then there was another letter misspelled so I said well let me call Ernest evil I said that I'll make it even more greater and obviously you enjoyed it so thanks for this review and I will review one of your pieces again and in return the reward
Dr. Ricky
