Stars, Anemones & Friends
Trying to lure the muse unsuccessfully.16 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Some good use of 'S' sounds, as a great use of poetic devices. The 5/7/5 connectedness was evident, and the whole descriptive imagery menu was at peak point. Well done Maria, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Some good use of 'S' sounds, as a great use of poetic devices. The 5/7/5 connectedness was evident, and the whole descriptive imagery menu was at peak point. Well done Maria, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Roy. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I think your muse did just fine with the challenge, you flowed with the piece and it sang of what you saw. Very nicely done
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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I think your muse did just fine with the challenge, you flowed with the piece and it sang of what you saw. Very nicely done
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Thanks so much, Barb.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A colorful poem using the multiple stanzas of 5-7-5s.
Well done.
We do truly have everything we could want her on this earth.
Well said.
Sharon
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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A colorful poem using the multiple stanzas of 5-7-5s.
Well done.
We do truly have everything we could want her on this earth.
Well said.
Sharon
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Thanks, Sharon.
Comment from robyn corum
MJ,
It's funny - this is third post I've seen today fussing about a fickle muse (including my own.) Strange how some days, she just refuses to wake up and get to work! But then, I guess we all need breaks sometimes. --sigh--
Fun and sweet - love, love the image~!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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MJ,
It's funny - this is third post I've seen today fussing about a fickle muse (including my own.) Strange how some days, she just refuses to wake up and get to work! But then, I guess we all need breaks sometimes. --sigh--
Fun and sweet - love, love the image~!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Maybe it's contagious...
Thanks for reading.
Comment from aryr
It certainly looks like you have met the criteria indicated for the writing. You definitely addressed the respected critters of various aspect and did indeed give thanks. I really enjoyed the picture and the background coloring, it made it rather comfortable to read. Thanks ever so much, well done.
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It certainly looks like you have met the criteria indicated for the writing. You definitely addressed the respected critters of various aspect and did indeed give thanks. I really enjoyed the picture and the background coloring, it made it rather comfortable to read. Thanks ever so much, well done.
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Maria;
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and feelings of contentment. All too often, we fail to see what we have and express our gratitude for it,
~patty~
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Hi, Maria;
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and feelings of contentment. All too often, we fail to see what we have and express our gratitude for it,
~patty~
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Thanks, Patty.
