Comment from teols2016

Excellent

It's not age...I have trouble with my phone as well. It is amusing to read about your own troubles. Thanks for sharing. Well done and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Eh? Pretty good. I didn't see the humor. I was in line behind a woman at Wl-Mart. She was returning a cordless phone. She said she didn't know how to use it. The sales clerk spent a long time trying to explain to her that you used it just like any other phone. You pick it up and dial it.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017

Thanks for you kind review, Ine. Have a lovely weekend.

Comment from Cybertron1986

Excellent

The relative and direct reality to mobile phones generated a humorous emotion due to the truth you presented here. Great topic. Despite a few grammatical errors, I was able to pick up on your implied messages and considered a strong five. I went over it twice to gage at the story. In doing so, I imagined my first mobile device back in 1998. Thank you for the welcomed chuckle :)

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good weekend coming soon.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Re-review;
Thank you for taking my suggestions for change,
~p~

Dear Anonymous Author;
Thank you for sharing your humorous story about the cell phone and the sometimes inconvenience it causes to our lives.

Some of your sentences are structured wrong and I'm wondering if English is your first language. For instance; 'The new one are very nice.' It should be the 'new ones.' or 'New one is'

~patty~

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good weekend coming soon. No English is my second language. I will use your suggestion.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

A good funny story.
It is a mystery, what should we do with our old electronics as they keep piling up.
I think technology is great, when it works.
It doesn't always.
Good luck in the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I could identify with your words, mobile phones are now mini computers and I have had the same problem with not being able to either make or receive a call and yearn for a phone that did only that! A wise write! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

Thanks for this kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week.