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Rain-Soaked Question

Some fun comes back to haunt Mike...

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Comment from JennaG
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Poor Mike! He's in trouble. Lol ;) Great entry for the 50 word contest! The story is funny, I especially liked the riddle. Well written and enjoyable to read! Best of luck to you in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Mustangpatty1029
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Dear Anonymous Author;
A well-paced fifty-word story with a clever ending. I wish you well in the contest, and thank you so much for sharing this tale,

~patty~

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
    Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from mmonaghan777
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Love it! Add a picture of a fiery red head with wild hair. Or Mike's face in the rain. You nailed it in four sentences and a really good last line.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Hahaha...yeah, there are more than a few women I have hooked up with over the years whom one could easily consider bad for my health and overall well-being.
But, did I listen?
Hell no!
Most of us don't because it feels so good to be bad, lol.
Great little story.
Best of luck to you in the contest!
~Dean ;)

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
    Thank you kindly.
reply by Dean Kuch on 09-Nov-2017
    My pleasure anytime... :)
Comment from giraffmang
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hi there,

Ah, you can always rely on a mate to dive for cover or wet themselves laughing when the crap hits the fan...lol

"Now? What?" - this bit of dialogue struck me as strange, the Now?

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
    Mike was wondering why he was doing this while they were outside in the rain. Thanks for your kind words.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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Poor Mike. Everyone knows that redheads are crazy, and when you get them in bed their maniacs. You better satisfy them or the next time you see them, you'll face the consequences.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
    I suppose so. Thanks.
Comment from Sharon Meda
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This is a humorous story, well told.
The ending is funny. It's not easy to tell a complete story in fifty words.
Good luck to you in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
    Thank you kindly.
Comment from Cybertron1986
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This was good humor summed up into that 50 word criteria. I can already see the redhead running at Mike, and the hidden implications of the cause of her anger. Very funny! Thank you for a good chuckle!

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
    Always happy to help. Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from GracieAnn
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This Humorous 50 Word Story writing prompt entry leads the reader quickly and effectively to a punch line that is funny in one sense as in juvenile joking and said in another because of how the woman was treated. Up for speculation. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
    I like to leave people with many emotions. Thank you.