Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your haiku " Jagged Steel Pieces". You followed the rules for this genre and I liked your choice of picture.
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017

Thank you for your review.

reply by marybell1 on 07-Nov-2017

You are most welcome.
Marybell1.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Mark,

Reallly cool image to start off this presentation. Definitely gets your attention.

I liked the 'message' of this poem but wasn't too sure about the association of the third line. How does the coral reef 'meet' the wreck and is there a case/effect thing here or what??

Some author notes might help...?

Thank you!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thank you for your review. I need to ponder your question.

reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017

As soon as a ship reaches the bottom of the sea, a coral reef starts growing. The wreck will, however, pose a danger to any diver who approaches it.

reply by robyn corum on 07-Nov-2017

Thanks for explaining, Mark. I've changed the rating but you might want to add that info to your author notes..??