Creating Beauty
Reflections on nature's artistic genius.46 total reviews
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
You'd wear out my sixes if I'd let you so except a virtual one easy.
What I love best about this gem is how you shift from the tetrameter to a bit of free verse in your last stanza. It really puts emphasis on it.
Love the term "broken ear". Very effective!
Take care,
Katiemaedead
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You'd wear out my sixes if I'd let you so except a virtual one easy.
What I love best about this gem is how you shift from the tetrameter to a bit of free verse in your last stanza. It really puts emphasis on it.
Love the term "broken ear". Very effective!
Take care,
Katiemaedead
Comment Written 03-Sep-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Great poem ... I love the word imagery and simple presentation. There's nothing as beautiful as nature. A pleasure to read..
Gypsy
"We are not meant to be perfect. We are meant to be whole." - Oprah Winfrey.
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Great poem ... I love the word imagery and simple presentation. There's nothing as beautiful as nature. A pleasure to read..
Gypsy
"We are not meant to be perfect. We are meant to be whole." - Oprah Winfrey.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2023
Comment from Raul1
Speaking from the viewpoint of this poet I am learning how to write like this. Excellent work! Very creative and interesting. Nice job! Thank you for sharing!
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Speaking from the viewpoint of this poet I am learning how to write like this. Excellent work! Very creative and interesting. Nice job! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2023
Comment from HAPPIOTTER
Well written. I enjoyed this very much. Love your art! Great writing. Thank you for sharing this with us! Have a wonderful Memorial weekend and Day! Happi
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Well written. I enjoyed this very much. Love your art! Great writing. Thank you for sharing this with us! Have a wonderful Memorial weekend and Day! Happi
Comment Written 03-Sep-2023
Comment from Eleri
The rhyme and rhythm of this poem are excellent and I love the ideas behind it but the ending just seems like an after-thought. It is beautiful in itself but does not really fit with the rest of the poem.
Eleri
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The rhyme and rhythm of this poem are excellent and I love the ideas behind it but the ending just seems like an after-thought. It is beautiful in itself but does not really fit with the rest of the poem.
Eleri
Comment Written 03-Sep-2023
Comment from JSD
Hmm, great poem, until the ending which, personally, I feel is shoved on a bit. It's a good idea, but I don't feel it fits the rest of the poem. But who am I? No-one.
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Hmm, great poem, until the ending which, personally, I feel is shoved on a bit. It's a good idea, but I don't feel it fits the rest of the poem. But who am I? No-one.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2023
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your words painted a beautiful picture. Yes, God has created much beauty in our world, yet we often don't stop to enjoy it or thank Him for it. Thank you for reposting this poem for us so we can enjoy it.
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Your words painted a beautiful picture. Yes, God has created much beauty in our world, yet we often don't stop to enjoy it or thank Him for it. Thank you for reposting this poem for us so we can enjoy it.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2023
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Poetic quatrains written in iambic tetrameter. easy ... you say ... for you.
Now I must go forth and see what the words used by you mean. j.k.
Very nicely done ... or revisited.
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Poetic quatrains written in iambic tetrameter. easy ... you say ... for you.
Now I must go forth and see what the words used by you mean. j.k.
Very nicely done ... or revisited.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2023
Comment from Julie Lau
Such a lovely flow of language, giving an impression of easiness, but completely faultless in rhythm, rhyme and scan. However, I would like to see a hyphen in the 'broken-winged' adjective.
Love your work - take it easy, easy (haha) Julie L
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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Such a lovely flow of language, giving an impression of easiness, but completely faultless in rhythm, rhyme and scan. However, I would like to see a hyphen in the 'broken-winged' adjective.
Love your work - take it easy, easy (haha) Julie L
Comment Written 03-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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You got the hyphen Julie and thanks for a great edity. Take care Julie. easy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
It's not as if I can't bear sadness and gloom, it's just that it all weighs the reader down after a while and achieves nothing (in my view). These happier verses, in contrast, lift one up and inspire. And you do them so well! Thanks for sharing. Debbie
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It's not as if I can't bear sadness and gloom, it's just that it all weighs the reader down after a while and achieves nothing (in my view). These happier verses, in contrast, lift one up and inspire. And you do them so well! Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 03-Sep-2023
