Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

A well written story.
The characters are well presented and the story is very interesting.
Coming in part way through and reading only a portion, I can still understand what is happening.
Well done.
Sharon

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017

Thanks for this sharing and I'm sure my son Jason also above thanks you talk to Ricky 1024

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Ricky

= The Ninja Turtles! Yep, my guys lived and breathed them back in the day.
= It's good you keep Jason alive through your grandchildren, so they will always know him.

= Cheers, J
= Have a good day/evening!
(*>*) Remember--A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*<*)

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017

Thanks Jax if you know the Ninja Turtles you must be the same age as me 17 LOL Ricky 1024

reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 07-Nov-2017

My guys were into them. I grew up a 'flower child/hippie, in the 60's & 70's. I'm pushing 68, and have EARNED every gray hair on my head that my Ninja Turtle boys gave me! LOL (*<*)

Comment from lauralumummu

Exceptional

Beautifully written such a touching tale. Thanks for sharing such a wonderfully poignant story in poetry form. I loved the way your emotion comes through to touch our hearts. So Sorry he is gone but lovely to know you will see him again. God Bless

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017

Thanks Laura buddy friend was what I called Jason and was the actual first poem that I ever created hundreds of thousands of homes in over 14 years later I compete with that one want a beautiful silver bowl if you would like to hear it I'll send it out for your eyes only thanks it's very private thing dr. Ricky

reply by lauralumummu on 07-Nov-2017

Thanks, Ricky I would be honored to read it.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A unique write and warm loving write about an experience that has prompted you to write this story and share this with us. Children are great believers, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017

Thanks Darlene all starts with a kiss but my case is started with that poem this not viewed buddy friend which I competed with over 14 years ago and one of my first trophy my very first poem and what I called him if he'd like to read one of the most beautiful things I've ever created just hit me back thanks talk to Ricky 1024

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

We do keep everything associated with the ones that go before, hoping one day to be able to hand them back to them in heaven. Nicely done

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017

Thanks Barb we all think that there's a heaven we all think we'll meet our family above nobody knows for sure till we actually get up there and then we will not only know that but everything we ever wanted to know this was a wonderful and thankful thought would you review dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Aside from some formatting issues (quotes where there is no dialogue, a couple of typos, and capital letters I'm not sure really belong), you've written another very touching piece, my friend. I have only one other, small suggestion - I would leave a space between these two lines: "Each and every day"----"But he said". You knocked the breath out of me with that one, Ricky. It deserves to stand out, IMO.

Well done!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017

Thanks for your time review and advise always appreciate doctor Ricky 1024

reply by Dawn Munro on 07-Nov-2017

You're very welcome.

Comment from Liberty Justice

Exceptional

SIX STARS 6******STARS for you Ricky! AMAZING! AWESOME. You are truly amazing and you are Doctor Ricky, Master Poet. I love your creativity the way you role-played this story/script with Alex pretending to have conversation with Jay. Your organization of toys and comfortable place to play is wonderful. WELL DONE! So beautiful! lol liberty justice SIX STARS

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017

Thanks very much for your time review and thoughts six stars can't do much better than that unless you get a blue ribbon thanks you give them out by the way Ricky 1024