Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Wow that is so poignant and deep. To have fallen for a murderer then give him a "dear John letter on death row telling him you have found another guy now that's pretty heavy. I am sure it has happened many a time.
like how do you wait for a man on death row without moving on in your life.
thanks for sharing

dip

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thanks for commenting. I didn't actually mean it to be that deep. I thought it was just a bit of fun. Have a ice day. Jen.

reply by DR DIP on 06-Nov-2017

oops sorry I went too far with the interpretation

dip

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

No worries. It was nice to know that someone could see the serious side of it.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Wow, this is a powerful message in this beautifully written poem, the artwork is (to me) a wee confusing as you are explaining Sorry the picture doesn't look Sorry, looks Happy they have moved on.... I just read again and think I get it you are sorry but now happy, this is making more sense to me the more I read it, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

You are right the art work is not what I wanted but it was the best I could find on Fanart. I Don't know how to attach it from my computer. Thanks for reading.

reply by kahpot on 06-Nov-2017

I understand as I cannot either****kahpot

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I just loved your I'm sorry poem "Dear John". It flowed well, but poor John. I don't think much of your timing!!!. I also liked you rhyming.,
All the best
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thanks very much for your comments .

reply by marybell1 on 06-Nov-2017

You are most welcome.
Marybell1.

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Jen,
This I'm Sorry contest submission takes the assignment and successfully engages the reader with various rhyming schemes and meter. Well done. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thanks for your comments.

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Well. I just love this!! LOVE the ending. I don't think she's sincerely sorry though, ha ha. A great entry, cute picture!!! Blessings....

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Many thanks

Comment from okanaganbell

Excellent

Surprise! The ending made me giggle a little, I must admit. It is a very simple, easily understood, message and poem. Short, sweet and to the point, like a Dear John should be, very nice.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Many thanks.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Good poem with a big surprise ending.
Well done, well rhymed, and a good story.
Good luck with the I'm Sorry Contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thank you

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Oh wow what a twist and this is very well written as an ABCB rhyming. Loved the entry for the I'm Sorry contest entry as it is very unique

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thank you for your wonderful review. X

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A sad write to a loved one who is on death row, a heartfelt letter, I wish you all the best for the contest, a sorrowful write, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks Dolly. Only a bit of nonsense.

Comment from lauralumummu

Excellent

Well done! I really like this, although I was pitying poor John right up until the end. The picture was appropriate as well, lol. This poem has a great flow so easy to read.
Thanks for this.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting.