Comment from B.B. Rose

Exceptional

Robert Frost said, "No surprise for the poet, no surprise for the reader." This was a true surprise for me. Love the ironic, "Best wishes for the future..." Great fun.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

I am thrilled to get 6 stars from you. Thank you so much.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

I hope you can forgive me.
It will be hard, I know.
Best wishes for the future.
It must be quite hard on death row.
I laughed so much at this. Great complimentary picture. Imagine how mad he will be! Well done this was so funny and I hope you do well in the competition kindest regards Meia xx

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 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you for your comments.

Comment from Mabaker

Exceptional

Oh, very clever! You get the shiny six for that effort. Now this, whatever you poets call it, worked for me. I could bounce along with all the words playing their part as they should, no jagged bits sticking out. Sincerely Mabaker

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks so much for the shiny six. I am thrilled.

reply by Mabaker on 05-Nov-2017

You are welcome. Anne