Blood and Tears
Remember our heroes on Veterans Day, November 11th.68 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
A very good six word poem.lt tells quite a story in so few words. This is very hard to do but you managed it very well. I wish you luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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A very good six word poem.lt tells quite a story in so few words. This is very hard to do but you managed it very well. I wish you luck in the competition.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Thank you for these kind words. It is hard to tell a story in six words. The image supplied by Ski-Ii made this possible.
May we never forget.
Blessings,
Brigitte
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Thank you so very much. The image by Ski-II made this one work.
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Brigitte;
Thank you for sharing your entry in the Six-word poetry contest. Your salute to all the Veterans is well received, and I think you did a great job with this one,
~patty~
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Hi, Brigitte;
Thank you for sharing your entry in the Six-word poetry contest. Your salute to all the Veterans is well received, and I think you did a great job with this one,
~patty~
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Thank you faithful reader. It is hard to tell any story or create a scenario with six words. I thank Ski-II for supplying the image which helped make this one work.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Commando
An awesome dedication to our Veterans having served, Brigitte Elko. Some came home on ships, planes, trains and yet, others in a box. Veterans day is only heartbeats away, let us be grateful for their courage and fighting spirit, while etching their memory in our hearts. Securing our right of choice was costly and yet, they bravely paid their part.
Some of us will walk among our heroes across the Hallowed Grounds this Veterans Day, others will ride their scooters, or roll along in their chairs. Of course, we shall hold our heads high, and watch Ole Glory as She ruffles a salute to us all from atop the pole. Some will smile, others cry and yet, we shall all Pledge Allegiance to God and Country.
As the sun kisses the earth in the west, A Bugler will blow TAPS. The sound shall echo along the headstones of our brave men and women--and against the Ears of God. Please, remember them America. We Veterans "SALUTE," you, Brigitte Elko! You are an awesome Author--and we love you. Best wishes for good health and happiness always.
Respectfully,
Bill (Junglefighter)
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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An awesome dedication to our Veterans having served, Brigitte Elko. Some came home on ships, planes, trains and yet, others in a box. Veterans day is only heartbeats away, let us be grateful for their courage and fighting spirit, while etching their memory in our hearts. Securing our right of choice was costly and yet, they bravely paid their part.
Some of us will walk among our heroes across the Hallowed Grounds this Veterans Day, others will ride their scooters, or roll along in their chairs. Of course, we shall hold our heads high, and watch Ole Glory as She ruffles a salute to us all from atop the pole. Some will smile, others cry and yet, we shall all Pledge Allegiance to God and Country.
As the sun kisses the earth in the west, A Bugler will blow TAPS. The sound shall echo along the headstones of our brave men and women--and against the Ears of God. Please, remember them America. We Veterans "SALUTE," you, Brigitte Elko! You are an awesome Author--and we love you. Best wishes for good health and happiness always.
Respectfully,
Bill (Junglefighter)
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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I replied in private message...thank you humble...just a thankful lady for heroes such as yourself. Six words can not describe what is in my heart.
Fondly.
Brigitte
Comment from sandy montgomery
Amen to your author's notes. I like this. It's difficult to say much in six words but you have said a mouthful. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Amen to your author's notes. I like this. It's difficult to say much in six words but you have said a mouthful. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much. Six words can not tell a full story that is why I amt thankful to Ski-II for the image.
Your reading and reviewing is appreciated beyond words.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from kahpot
An excellent short poem you have said so much here and yes our heroes should be celebrated, I believe much more often, very well written and good luck in your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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An excellent short poem you have said so much here and yes our heroes should be celebrated, I believe much more often, very well written and good luck in your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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My husband is a veteran and I thank God for our heroes who came home and pray for their peace if they sacrificed their all. I totally agree, with you. May we honor them continuously lest we forget...It is hard to say enough in only six words but my note under the poem tells readers that it came from the heart.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from DonandVicki
Your short poem touched my heart. I am a veteran and as I read your author's notes I appreciated your kind and generous thoughts and feelings. Don and Vicki.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Your short poem touched my heart. I am a veteran and as I read your author's notes I appreciated your kind and generous thoughts and feelings. Don and Vicki.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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My husband is also a Veteran. I honor and revere the braveness and sacrifices of those that fought for all of us. May we never forget the sacrifices....In God we trust... Thank you for your kind review. It is hard to tell such a story in six words when there is so much more to tell. Thank you for serving our country!
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
I love the deep message in your short poem. It is very hard to convey such emotion when limited by number of words, but you really managed to pull it off.
The nod to our veterans was a wonderful tribute. There is so much these people went through, that honoring their sacrifice is a wonderful gift.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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I love the deep message in your short poem. It is very hard to convey such emotion when limited by number of words, but you really managed to pull it off.
The nod to our veterans was a wonderful tribute. There is so much these people went through, that honoring their sacrifice is a wonderful gift.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you for this kind review. May we never forget their sacrifice and bravery.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Paul Bownas
I am not sure what sort of cocktail you like, but this is reminds me of a Spanish bullring, where blood and dust are it would seem, fairly commonplace, but that I think is probably a place where many of us would rather not go. Perhaps that is part of your message, reminding us that either substance can be present wherever we go, and not necessarily be avoidable.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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I am not sure what sort of cocktail you like, but this is reminds me of a Spanish bullring, where blood and dust are it would seem, fairly commonplace, but that I think is probably a place where many of us would rather not go. Perhaps that is part of your message, reminding us that either substance can be present wherever we go, and not necessarily be avoidable.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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I think the note under the poem explains the cocktail to which I am referring. Our heroes that lost their lives fighting for our country. Their blood mixes with the dirt....cocktail analogy, like gin and tonic. Since I could only use six words, I could not be more specific.
Thank you for reading and I hope you can now visualize my attempt.
Brigitte
Comment from elainec4
Enjoyed this--even before I looked up the definition of "ineffable" !!! It has been a while since I saw this word. It is almost beyond words to describe the sacrifices made for our freedom. Great tribute to our heroes.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Enjoyed this--even before I looked up the definition of "ineffable" !!! It has been a while since I saw this word. It is almost beyond words to describe the sacrifices made for our freedom. Great tribute to our heroes.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you for reading. There are a few poets on this site that send me to the dictionary repeatedly.
Usually, I write from the heart and very simply.
Brigitte
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a striking poem, in tribute to our veterans, of which I have two in my family. Thank you for honoring them with your words, which comply fully with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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In my opinion, a striking poem, in tribute to our veterans, of which I have two in my family. Thank you for honoring them with your words, which comply fully with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much. I wish I could told a fuller story but could only use six words. May we never forget our heroes and revere their memory. My husband is a Veteran,too.
Blessings,
Brigitte
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You are indeed welcome, Brigitte, and thank you to your husband for his service also...Eve
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Blessings and in God we trust...
Brigitte
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Absolutely...Eve
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Thank you. My husband is also a Veteran. Six words is not enough to tell the story. The words came from my heart.
brigitte
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You are very welcome, Brigitte, and I agree with you, but the message is very clear, regardless...Eve
