Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

I guess there are gossips in all walks of live, or in this case all of nature.lol
Nice one line piece to go with the picture, but I do know some gossips that are men.lol

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi robina1978,

I always like to read what you post.
You are so wonderful at writing them.
This is another interesting poem you've written.
I'll keep looking for new ones that you will write.

Kat

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This one-line poem, No Gossip Allowed, extends the prohibition to the bird world, I see. I'm not sure we can keep those beachcombers quiet. Forget the chickedees and the magpies.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

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Comment from Ellie707

Excellent

What an beautiful picture! The photography is magnificent!

I love the one line which is quite adequate in matching the mood of the photograph.
Girls love to gossip so I imagine 'girl' birds gossip too.

Nice job capturing the mood with the tagline!

Ellie

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.

reply by Ellie707 on 06-Nov-2017

You're welcome!

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Hehe! I love this; it says so much.
I have a suggestion -- maybe you could change the word 'gossiping' to another word because it is used twice. Maybe 'chirping'?
I'm trying not to gossip; I know how it feels when it's me being talked about. There is a difference between sharing information everyone needs to know, like if someone was attacked physically, to talking about who said this to who, etc.
Hey, good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow. I will see how it comes out.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

A good One Line Poem.
It has a good message.
And I love the picture you've posted with it. They do look like they're gossiping.
Good luck with you competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

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Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

Your one line poem made me smile. It reminds me of chattering birds who appear to be gossiping. Your poem is playful with G and B alliteration to creatively convey your message.

Thank you for sharing. I wish you contest success with your fine entry.

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 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

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Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written one line poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good wording and the art work you chose was adorable. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

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 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.