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"The Gift of Life II"

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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Ricky

= This is a lovely dedication to your son on his birthday.
= Love the reference to--chocolate cake! YUMMY. Must have been his favorite?
= Great picture of Jay. Was he in it--about 15--16?

= Cheers, J
= Have a good day/evening!
(*>*) Remember--A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*<*)

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    Hijacks the picture of Jason was taken while he was at a junior so he was either late 17th and early 18th and today is November 5th and I and it is his birthday he passed away at 18 and he was born in 84 so he would be 80 he would be actually 33 years old today and probably be giving me grandchildren.
    Thanks, Doctor Ricky 1024.
reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 05-Nov-2017
    Thanks for the questions answered.
    Appreciate it. You do him proud, Dad. (*<*)
Comment from lauralumummu
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Such a special message here, but so sad. Very well written shows just how precious life is. This really touched my heart and brought home that we should never take those we love for granted. God Bless you.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    your words ring true on his birthday morning 80 4:33 today 18 in heaven always forever... Doctor Ricky 1024.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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I knew the POV you used because I have thought often of what my sons would have to say. This took me back and I remember why I have their pictures out on every holiday

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    Thanks Barbara as we going to the up-and-coming holidays the trip would have holidays at Thanksgiving in November Christmas and December and New Year's in January of the following year 201 8 of the year of Our Lord without your child it's true it's horrendous thanks dr. Ricky 10:24 today by the way is Jason's 33rd birthday on Earth if you was here and in heaven who knows
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hi Ricky. I could hear your son's voice telling you all the things that you seem to relive almost daily, but this time it felt like he was saying it's okay dad because I'll always be your heart. A good write Ricky. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    Here's an example of exactly what you're talking about written two weeks after we donate Jason's organs on April 1st April Fools Day 200 3 or exactly on the 15th can pick competed with this and actually in the Hilton in DC and what a beautiful trophy among thousands of people from all over the world with the international Society of poetry danced with them and Tony Orlando and Dawn they had HBO there was a great time so tell me what you think the very first poem I've ever written hundreds and hundreds of thousands later here's the first one called and has I made present buddy friend which is what I called my son when he was younger and it states I'm not here right now but I'm not far I'm in a place close by not far like a star you'll feel this place just take a moment and then you'll see then you will know just where I shall be Jason Richard s m r k o v s k y born November 5th 1984 passed away state record March 31st 2003 religious death April 1st they took his organs April 1st 2003 he lives on there forever in in the bodies of two men and one young woman with his organs thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi Ricky,

This is a heartfelt piece and really hits home. Our memories and photos stay the same of those departed. ell maybe not departed but no longer with us. Frozen in time...

G

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    Exactly right giraffe mang Jason will always be frozen in time but existing in the bodies of three others on his birthday age 33 today on Earth and Heaven who knows thanks dr. Ricky 1024