Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

The honey-bee and stamen kiss
Exchanging ecstasy,
As nature lulls the bee with bliss
To carry blooms to be.

Easy,

What a delightful, slow-paced and graceful poem about the change of season. (Spring is my favorite, btw!)

I really enjoyed this and plan to post the above lines on my profile page for all to see as my writer's quote of the day! (Please let me know if you have a problem with that, and I will happily -- or not so happily remove it.) *smile*

Thanks!

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

No problem what-so-ever robyn. I am honored you chose one of my lines for your profile page. Thank you so much dear friend for the great review. tom

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Okay, now this one I get. The classic ballad structure flows very well and the piece is smooth throughout. good subject matter too.

GMG

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 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem. I like the style you use and th way you represent nature with such evocative imagery. Thanks for sharing and have yourself a really great day

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 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017