Spring Garden
A thought of Spring53 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hi Easy, yes a joy it was to travel with through the spring and early summer where everything grow, emitting a bunch fragrance from the new growth.
I loved your wonderfully written poem. Ulla:)))
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Hi Easy, yes a joy it was to travel with through the spring and early summer where everything grow, emitting a bunch fragrance from the new growth.
I loved your wonderfully written poem. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 19-Jun-2023
Comment from Kate McLennan
This is beautiful and I wish I could walk around this garden. I loved the metaphor "palette of perfumes" as I imagined smelling and breathing in the fresh garden air.
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This is beautiful and I wish I could walk around this garden. I loved the metaphor "palette of perfumes" as I imagined smelling and breathing in the fresh garden air.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2023
Comment from forestport12
So many restrictions and rules with a particular style of poetry, it makes me respect what you do all the more. I liked how you made the fragrances like almost sexually intoxicating. Wise use of that metaphor.
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So many restrictions and rules with a particular style of poetry, it makes me respect what you do all the more. I liked how you made the fragrances like almost sexually intoxicating. Wise use of that metaphor.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2023
Comment from Wendy G
Beautifully written. A wonderful celebration of both spring and love in nature. The imagery is lyrical and uplifting, the ballad metre is perfect for this one. Very pleasurable read.
Wendy
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Beautifully written. A wonderful celebration of both spring and love in nature. The imagery is lyrical and uplifting, the ballad metre is perfect for this one. Very pleasurable read.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Jun-2023
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This is a lively poem about spring time when all flowers bloom, generating a lively fragrance, smelling like perfumes coming from pretty girls.
Most people are glad that winter is over and they welcome sprint to start a new year.
Thank you for sharing this poem with us.
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This is a lively poem about spring time when all flowers bloom, generating a lively fragrance, smelling like perfumes coming from pretty girls.
Most people are glad that winter is over and they welcome sprint to start a new year.
Thank you for sharing this poem with us.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2023
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is sweet and full of alliteration! I love the way you rhyme every other line. This speaks of spring and how it smells so sweet. I want it to come and be with me as I love spring the most. Thanks for sharing this lovely tetrameter poem!
I wish you the best in your upcoming week!
Jesse
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This is sweet and full of alliteration! I love the way you rhyme every other line. This speaks of spring and how it smells so sweet. I want it to come and be with me as I love spring the most. Thanks for sharing this lovely tetrameter poem!
I wish you the best in your upcoming week!
Jesse
Comment Written 18-Jun-2023
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Well done, easy. You did a wonderful job romanticizing the perfume of the Spring and Summers Blossom's. Yes, it is indeed in great Ballad form and the meter is perfect. Well done. Nancy:)
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Well done, easy. You did a wonderful job romanticizing the perfume of the Spring and Summers Blossom's. Yes, it is indeed in great Ballad form and the meter is perfect. Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 18-Jun-2023
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was beautiful. I love that purple was the common theme then it became the palette of colors. You tantalized my senses with scents and colors. Great job. This was exquisitely written. Gretchen
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This was beautiful. I love that purple was the common theme then it became the palette of colors. You tantalized my senses with scents and colors. Great job. This was exquisitely written. Gretchen
Comment Written 18-Jun-2023
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Spring Garden, presented with six ABAB-rhymed quatrains, elevates the sublime smells of the natural world which is the perfume we prefer......................
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This poem, Spring Garden, presented with six ABAB-rhymed quatrains, elevates the sublime smells of the natural world which is the perfume we prefer......................
Comment Written 18-Jun-2023
Comment from JT traveller
Lustful thoughts about a garden. Who knew? I admire your vivid imagination. I have always thought the interaction between bees and stamen was a very personal one. You have captured it with ease. Jacqueline
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Lustful thoughts about a garden. Who knew? I admire your vivid imagination. I have always thought the interaction between bees and stamen was a very personal one. You have captured it with ease. Jacqueline
Comment Written 18-Jun-2023
