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My Halloween story.

A short story about what Halloween should be and should not

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Comment from BOO ghost
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Ole Spooky Dean Cook Kucsh is the king of horror. Yeah, lighting candles on graves seem real spooky. Who would dare on Halloween? I am a ghost, so don't give a hoot or toot. In fact, BOO came back to fanstory on Halloween. The bells where tolling and graves a spoiling. Kids are sissies these days on Halloween. BOO used to trick or treat all night long. if you ain't scared, it ain't Halloween. or why have it if candy is all you want? the spirit is gone from Halloween. Not near what it used to be. Mr Rodgers neighborhood. BOO!

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Robina
what an excellent story and scary poem reminding us with you very descriptive notes all the Halloween activities.
Gert

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.
reply by Gert sherwood on 05-Nov-2017
    You are welcome Robina
    Gert
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Robin, where I come from (Denmark) we don't celebrate Halloween either. Or more to the point we didn't use to. Your poem was scary enough, I can't write horror stories either. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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OH wow yes it is a Halloween story and I amnot sure of the rules but as for me it includes everything needed for a horror story...well almost.lol

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.
Comment from royowen
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I believe in Mexico, they call it "celebrate the dead", honouring their ancestors in feast and celebration. Like Holland we don't celebrate it much, although it's crept in a little in the last few years, (I hope it goes away Ine, I don't like it much) well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.
reply by royowen on 05-Nov-2017
    Well done
Comment from mermaids
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I think your poem is scary, you have a vivid use of words. I like the funny side of Halloween instead of the scary side of it. We have enough frightening things in life already.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.
Comment from Cindy Warren
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I liked the poem. Unfortunately, I had to work and I didn't get a chance to watch horror movies this year. It wasn't much fun, but at least I made some extra money. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A scary write and killing is a scary Halloween subject and I think I am safer with ghosts and the undead zombies! I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.