Hammer's Fault
A poem to express emotion3 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about emotions and emotional effect of a hammer; how it works and has to go for memories and wishes to act other human activities like seeking apology; I liked.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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This speaks about emotions and emotional effect of a hammer; how it works and has to go for memories and wishes to act other human activities like seeking apology; I liked.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Thank you.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Holy hammers, miajaffri. Are you saying that you hit your friend with a hammer?
Jumpin' Jeezus on a painted Palomino pony!
This poem gives a whole new meaning to the phrase, "Getting hammered."
At least your friend didn't lose an eye and has just a scar.
It could'a been much worse.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Holy hammers, miajaffri. Are you saying that you hit your friend with a hammer?
Jumpin' Jeezus on a painted Palomino pony!
This poem gives a whole new meaning to the phrase, "Getting hammered."
At least your friend didn't lose an eye and has just a scar.
It could'a been much worse.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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It was an accident. But, I am grateful it wasn't worse.
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I'll bet your friend is too!
All the best to you & yours,
~Dean
Comment from Ogden
One wonders how a little girl's eye got between your hammer and the wall, or at least this one does. That's apparently a heavy burden to have carried for so many years.
At least it sparked a good poem.
Don (aka Ogden)
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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One wonders how a little girl's eye got between your hammer and the wall, or at least this one does. That's apparently a heavy burden to have carried for so many years.
At least it sparked a good poem.
Don (aka Ogden)
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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I was hammering a nail into a piece of wood on the grass. My friend was standing behind me.
