Never A Bother When You Pray
Spiritual commentary.16 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Patricia. This is a very nicely constructed and rhymed poem with a loving message that He is there for us. He is our father and our comfort after all and does His job well. Marilyn
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
Hi Patricia. This is a very nicely constructed and rhymed poem with a loving message that He is there for us. He is our father and our comfort after all and does His job well. Marilyn
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Marilyn.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Patricia;
Thank you for sharing your faith and love of Jesus with us through the words of this poem. He does love to hear us pray - He is so thrilled at our voices when we direct our words to Him.
~patty~
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
Hi, Patricia;
Thank you for sharing your faith and love of Jesus with us through the words of this poem. He does love to hear us pray - He is so thrilled at our voices when we direct our words to Him.
~patty~
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Patty.
Comment from Sasha
I apologize for being late with reviewing this but I have been locked out of my computer for three days and this is the first chance I have had to read my 'oh so many messages'. Very nice work with this one. I enjoyed it very much.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
I apologize for being late with reviewing this but I have been locked out of my computer for three days and this is the first chance I have had to read my 'oh so many messages'. Very nice work with this one. I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Sasha.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Patricia,
Again you've written a very nice poem.
It was very interesting to read.
You're always wonderful at writing them.
Kat
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
Hi Patricia,
Again you've written a very nice poem.
It was very interesting to read.
You're always wonderful at writing them.
Kat
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, Kat. I hope you will be back to writing soon as I miss your work.
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How sweet of you to tell me that you miss my work. I'll try my best to be on here for a long time yet. Kat
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
A beautiful, spiritual poem Patricia, the Lords words to children as they pray is so moving.
your words flow so smoothly and are so poignant.........just wonderful.
Mitchell
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
A beautiful, spiritual poem Patricia, the Lords words to children as they pray is so moving.
your words flow so smoothly and are so poignant.........just wonderful.
Mitchell
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, Mitchell.
Comment from jaded831
How nice to know there is someone listening. Knowing Jesus hears our heartfelt prayers, is like having a psychologist on hand. In your poem once again your faith is reflected and has a domino affect on the reader. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
How nice to know there is someone listening. Knowing Jesus hears our heartfelt prayers, is like having a psychologist on hand. In your poem once again your faith is reflected and has a domino affect on the reader. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, Jaded.
Comment from Dean Kuch
B(b)ecause I know things about you
that many others will never see...You need to capitalize the "B" in the word "because" here, Pat...
Then(,) as you pray(,) my child... Add commas where indicated for proper punctuation, Pat...
Decent poem, excellent message as usual.
~Dean
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
B(b)ecause I know things about you
that many others will never see...You need to capitalize the "B" in the word "because" here, Pat...
Then(,) as you pray(,) my child... Add commas where indicated for proper punctuation, Pat...
Decent poem, excellent message as usual.
~Dean
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, Dean and the help.
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My pleasure.
~Dean
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I did go back and change the post. I had just sent the reply before I made the changes.
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I saw that.
I have restored your fifth star as well. :)
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Thank you.
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Absolutely. :)
Comment from Joan E.
I again enjoyed your speaking in the voice of the "Heavenly Father". I admired your rhymed quatrains and the empowering final line. Cheers and have a pleasant weekend- Joan
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
I again enjoyed your speaking in the voice of the "Heavenly Father". I admired your rhymed quatrains and the empowering final line. Cheers and have a pleasant weekend- Joan
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, Joan.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Pat
= So true. Many things can be pushed off for another to do in our stead.
= BUT, the Lord's calling/work, is non-negotiable.
= Well penned, with super artwork.
Cheers, J
Have a good day/evening!
A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*>*)
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
Hi, Pat
= So true. Many things can be pushed off for another to do in our stead.
= BUT, the Lord's calling/work, is non-negotiable.
= Well penned, with super artwork.
Cheers, J
Have a good day/evening!
A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*>*)
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, Jackie.
Comment from Teri7
Patricia, This is a very well written poem that I truly needed to read right now. Such great wording full of truth. I am thankful that is the way He truly is. You used great wording and imagery! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
Patricia, This is a very well written poem that I truly needed to read right now. Such great wording full of truth. I am thankful that is the way He truly is. You used great wording and imagery! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the kind review, Teri.