Into the night
Nocturnal love15 total reviews
Comment from Heather Knight
I love the couplets and the AABB rhyme. I also like the dark background color which is perfect for your subject matter.
Thanks for entertaining us once again.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
  |
I love the couplets and the AABB rhyme. I also like the dark background color which is perfect for your subject matter.
Thanks for entertaining us once again.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
-
Always a pleasure Maria Thankyou
xdip
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning again, DIP: WOW! What a picture. I mean it you surely choose the very best pictures. You have a great eye for the right photo to bring out your poem.
This kind of moonshine would only be the reason for a magical night together or what feels like magic, that being together as the moon hang up in the sky, as the night feeds our drive for each other. Until the sun comes up, bringing in the beginning of the new day.
I can see it all, DIP. These are the things in life we must appreciate before it is no more. Great poem.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
|
Good morning again, DIP: WOW! What a picture. I mean it you surely choose the very best pictures. You have a great eye for the right photo to bring out your poem.
This kind of moonshine would only be the reason for a magical night together or what feels like magic, that being together as the moon hang up in the sky, as the night feeds our drive for each other. Until the sun comes up, bringing in the beginning of the new day.
I can see it all, DIP. These are the things in life we must appreciate before it is no more. Great poem.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
-
Thanks so much Tier I am so glad you like it
You definitely spoil me with your wonderfully supportive reviews. I greatly appreciate them
xdip
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written passionate poem. The magic of the moon light leads to romantic actions that both lovers enjoy. When the sun rises the magic time is over.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
|
A very well-written passionate poem. The magic of the moon light leads to romantic actions that both lovers enjoy. When the sun rises the magic time is over.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
-
Thanks as always Sandra
dip
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Yet again Dip you enchant your reader with the perfect romantic love poem. It sways under that gorgeous picture and it's as though a piece of fine music is being played. Loved it mate. xoxo Kiwi
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
|
Yet again Dip you enchant your reader with the perfect romantic love poem. It sways under that gorgeous picture and it's as though a piece of fine music is being played. Loved it mate. xoxo Kiwi
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
-
Deb you are so kind to me with your wonderful reviews. They only give me the impetus to continue to write.
Thankyou as always
dip
Comment from Daniel Silverhawk
Into the Night. And letting dreams unravel as though clustered up in little balls of nothingness. I remember a time I had quite a bit of difficulty finding an appropriate rhyme for love. Above. Dove. Glove. Shove.
Then came to mind of. Not the best way to end s sentence maybe. But I love it's use here.
Two becoming one before the rising of the sun.
Thanks for sharing your talent
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
|
Into the Night. And letting dreams unravel as though clustered up in little balls of nothingness. I remember a time I had quite a bit of difficulty finding an appropriate rhyme for love. Above. Dove. Glove. Shove.
Then came to mind of. Not the best way to end s sentence maybe. But I love it's use here.
Two becoming one before the rising of the sun.
Thanks for sharing your talent
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
-
Daniel that is a wonderfully positive review I get sick of using the common obvious rhyming words of love/above/ dove/glove and shove.
"Of" I feel can work in the right context like the phrase "That's all I'm thinking of" for instance.
Thankyou again for being so supportive of my work.
dip
