"The Gift of Life II"
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Comment from apky
Well, after Halloween, doc, the Bearded Man will sure come bringing gifts!
"You see Reviewers...
"She is Suffering Tremendously!"
"From Bad Kidneys and "The Grim Reaper of Death!"
"Has taken to her and made this small child...
"His QUEST!"
BUT...
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He's almost here!"
"And, oh dear...
"With His Sleigh of Eight Reindeer!"
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Well, after Halloween, doc, the Bearded Man will sure come bringing gifts!
"You see Reviewers...
"She is Suffering Tremendously!"
"From Bad Kidneys and "The Grim Reaper of Death!"
"Has taken to her and made this small child...
"His QUEST!"
BUT...
...
He's almost here!"
"And, oh dear...
"With His Sleigh of Eight Reindeer!"
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Apky.
Halloween?
Your place or mind?
Don't tell Hubby!
Ricky.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
OH wow I truly love this one, it is so very well thought out and wonderful so full of information and feeling. What a stand. Nicely done
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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OH wow I truly love this one, it is so very well thought out and wonderful so full of information and feeling. What a stand. Nicely done
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thanks darling snd...
Happy After Ween and Happy Giving to B!
Ricky...
Comment from mermaids
Not much I can say here except I applaud you for this story. It is great to tell a Christmas story and the gift of life, an organ donation is the most wonderful gift. This poem is definitely your best.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Not much I can say here except I applaud you for this story. It is great to tell a Christmas story and the gift of life, an organ donation is the most wonderful gift. This poem is definitely your best.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thanks forever Dear.
By Doctor Ricky 1024.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Jumpin' Jeezus H. Christ on a Painted Palomino Pony, Ricky!
First of all, I never knew you were a Doctor. Where did you receive your MD from--what college or institution?
Do you think you rambled on, and on, and on long enough to finally reach the climax and the basic gist of this?
I'm truly sorry about the loss of your son and I realize we all grieve in very different ways.
But does this sort of psycho babbling really honor Jay's memory? It hardly even makes any sense, at least to me.
Look, I don't pull punches simply because a topic is a touchy, personal one. If someone has the balls to post something then they'd better have the balls to back it up and defend their work with a reasonable explanation.
I take it that a young girl named Emily Ann received an organ donation from your son? And that organ donation saved her life?
Okay, that I can understand and if you're gonna state that fact, just do it.
Santa and Satan use the same letters you know?
I wish you well...
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Jumpin' Jeezus H. Christ on a Painted Palomino Pony, Ricky!
First of all, I never knew you were a Doctor. Where did you receive your MD from--what college or institution?
Do you think you rambled on, and on, and on long enough to finally reach the climax and the basic gist of this?
I'm truly sorry about the loss of your son and I realize we all grieve in very different ways.
But does this sort of psycho babbling really honor Jay's memory? It hardly even makes any sense, at least to me.
Look, I don't pull punches simply because a topic is a touchy, personal one. If someone has the balls to post something then they'd better have the balls to back it up and defend their work with a reasonable explanation.
I take it that a young girl named Emily Ann received an organ donation from your son? And that organ donation saved her life?
Okay, that I can understand and if you're gonna state that fact, just do it.
Santa and Satan use the same letters you know?
I wish you well...
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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The premises of this besides organ tissue donation saving lives was that there was a little girl her name I never learned The Gift of Life person Morrison already told me this story which I enhanced she's elsw The Gift of Life Philadelphia she she told me never to tell anybody or she could lose her job that was not public information so if you got it so you think my balls are big enough to back it up talk to Ricky 1024 and the degree is through Rutgers and its degree and poetry and as a poet of Laureate doctor's degree tanks
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ok
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Ricky,
this is certainly written in your unique style but the message and story comes across very well indeed.
You do have a few spelling errors and if formatted a little differently I think you could reach a lot more people with your truly heartfelt words.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Hi Ricky,
this is certainly written in your unique style but the message and story comes across very well indeed.
You do have a few spelling errors and if formatted a little differently I think you could reach a lot more people with your truly heartfelt words.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Thanks mucho Macho dr. Ricky 1024 reviews
Comment from pbomar1115
This is one of the most heartfelt creation I've seen. You have a great heart and imagination to come up with a feel-good creation on organ donation. But on this job, God himself performed the donation.
Phillip
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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This is one of the most heartfelt creation I've seen. You have a great heart and imagination to come up with a feel-good creation on organ donation. But on this job, God himself performed the donation.
Phillip
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Thanks Philip for your wonderful review and now your words ring so true Ricky 1024
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You're welcome, Ricky.
Phillip
Comment from LIJ Red
Run a spell check. This reads like a free verse, but the story comes through quite well, and a good one it is. Until they can clone one's own organs for the perfect match, many many lives will depend on donors.
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Run a spell check. This reads like a free verse, but the story comes through quite well, and a good one it is. Until they can clone one's own organs for the perfect match, many many lives will depend on donors.
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Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Thanks little red I enjoyed writing this as well as posting it I'm posting it up to the first page number one position hoping for some great reviews thanks for this talk to Ricky 1024
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Ricky. What a great idea to write non fiction poetry about the life giving gift of life through cell donation. You have said a lot in this one. It'a good piece of writing. xoxo deborah
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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Hi Ricky. What a great idea to write non fiction poetry about the life giving gift of life through cell donation. You have said a lot in this one. It'a good piece of writing. xoxo deborah
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Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Hi kiwi girl thanks for your review this is on page one also the very first position it will get 6280 reviews I expected to do very well thanks talk to Ricky 1024
