You Will Hide No More
Once upon a dark night dreary7 total reviews
Comment from Zinnia48
Wow! Edgar Allen Poe must be doing wheelies with delight from his grave! This poem is an intense story full of vibrant imagery. What a Halloween treat! Thanks! Caroline
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Wow! Edgar Allen Poe must be doing wheelies with delight from his grave! This poem is an intense story full of vibrant imagery. What a Halloween treat! Thanks! Caroline
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the only and exclusive face, so scary, could not be forgotten, anytime it would come up in vision or mind, nothing of it could be erased, dipped into soul; I liked.
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This speaks the only and exclusive face, so scary, could not be forgotten, anytime it would come up in vision or mind, nothing of it could be erased, dipped into soul; I liked.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good scary Halloween poem with a scary picture.
Well done. Good rhythm and rhyming. Tells a good story.
Best of luck to you in the competition.
Sharon
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A good scary Halloween poem with a scary picture.
Well done. Good rhythm and rhyming. Tells a good story.
Best of luck to you in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 30-Oct-2017
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your piece in the rhythm and rhyme of Poe's Raven. Your lines give the old piece a new shine and outlook. Well done.
~patty~
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Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your piece in the rhythm and rhyme of Poe's Raven. Your lines give the old piece a new shine and outlook. Well done.
~patty~
Comment Written 30-Oct-2017
Comment from luther maddox
You are so right because once I began to read Poe came to my mind. This is good work, very artful and crafty, and savvy written. In a way I cannot say enough for this good work for the contest.
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You are so right because once I began to read Poe came to my mind. This is good work, very artful and crafty, and savvy written. In a way I cannot say enough for this good work for the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2017
Comment from Katherine2
Excellent, excellent read. Loved the artwork too!
You have captured the flair of Poe's energy so well.
Your work is exciting and gripping, making the reader want to continue and see what happens next. I think that this piece is a definite Halloween winner!!
Good luck in the contest.
Katherine
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Excellent, excellent read. Loved the artwork too!
You have captured the flair of Poe's energy so well.
Your work is exciting and gripping, making the reader want to continue and see what happens next. I think that this piece is a definite Halloween winner!!
Good luck in the contest.
Katherine
Comment Written 30-Oct-2017
Comment from dragonpoet
This seems to be a rewriting of Poe's "The Raven". It tells of a bird that attacks your conscience and makes you see and show those things you try to keep secret from others and yourself.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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This seems to be a rewriting of Poe's "The Raven". It tells of a bird that attacks your conscience and makes you see and show those things you try to keep secret from others and yourself.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 30-Oct-2017
