Whispers In The Wind
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Comment from BeasPeas
This romance poem has an unusual rhyme pattern--that is alternating first and last lines throughout. Illustrated well and with a wistful quality of love shared and gone. Marilyn
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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This romance poem has an unusual rhyme pattern--that is alternating first and last lines throughout. Illustrated well and with a wistful quality of love shared and gone. Marilyn
Comment Written 28-Dec-2017
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Comment from Heather Knight
Very cool! I wish I could master rhyme and rhythm like you do. Very nice presentation as well.
The words of the poem are beautiful. It sounds great when read aloud.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Very cool! I wish I could master rhyme and rhythm like you do. Very nice presentation as well.
The words of the poem are beautiful. It sounds great when read aloud.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
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Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your poem about the intricacies of new love or old love that is celebrated with kisses in the rain. Well done,
~patty~
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your poem about the intricacies of new love or old love that is celebrated with kisses in the rain. Well done,
~patty~
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Great sentiments here and loving words, no clear rhyming scheme but nonetheless an enjoyable read, my favourite stanza is the second one, I could identify with your words,love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Great sentiments here and loving words, no clear rhyming scheme but nonetheless an enjoyable read, my favourite stanza is the second one, I could identify with your words,love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
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Comment from Teri7
This is very beautiful thoughts and whispers in the wind you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Blessings, teri
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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This is very beautiful thoughts and whispers in the wind you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Blessings, teri
Comment Written 30-Oct-2017
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Comment from Mark Schardine
I feel your kiss upon my face
from somewhere out in space.
The experience was so remarkable, that the memory loses nothing of its vivid nature. Thank you for this poem.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
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I feel your kiss upon my face
from somewhere out in space.
The experience was so remarkable, that the memory loses nothing of its vivid nature. Thank you for this poem.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2017
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Comment from kahpot
What an excellent poem " it should be in the Love competition" it reads and flows extremely well with great artwork ( Lamped by the moon's soft light) great line, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
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What an excellent poem " it should be in the Love competition" it reads and flows extremely well with great artwork ( Lamped by the moon's soft light) great line, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Oct-2017
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Comment from Kazzawin
There is something quite haunting about this.
I like the flow and the alternate rhyming sequence which enhances the soft whispers in the words.
This feels melancholy and reminiscing, and one can almost feel the silence and stillness of night.
A nice, enjoyable read : )
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
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There is something quite haunting about this.
I like the flow and the alternate rhyming sequence which enhances the soft whispers in the words.
This feels melancholy and reminiscing, and one can almost feel the silence and stillness of night.
A nice, enjoyable read : )
Comment Written 29-Oct-2017
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Comment from Irish Rain
Oh, what a lovely tribute, beautiful memory for someone no longer there. This is quite magical, and I love the phrase 'echoes of your sighs'...lovely. Blessings...
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
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Oh, what a lovely tribute, beautiful memory for someone no longer there. This is quite magical, and I love the phrase 'echoes of your sighs'...lovely. Blessings...
Comment Written 29-Oct-2017
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. The memory of a lovers words come as whispers in our head and we experience them closeby again. We feel their touch again in our mind and in our heart.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
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A very well-written poem. The memory of a lovers words come as whispers in our head and we experience them closeby again. We feel their touch again in our mind and in our heart.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2017
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