Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

This poem is a beaute, as always, both verbally and in presentation. The only problem I can see is that in line #4, there are eight syllables instead of seven. That aside, I loved it, and I know you will do well In the contest!

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017

Thank you for the nice review, Brenda.

reply by brenda faye curtis on 04-Nov-2017

You're welcome.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

And when they fall before the rain hits, the beauty of the autumn bed really shows through for all to enjoy. Nicely done five line poem

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017

Thank you for the nice review, Barb.

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Very visual and powerful. Not much you can say in five lines, but you did an excellent job. I like the different color font for the colorful words. The picture compliments your words. Your entire presentation gets a thumbs up.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017

Thank you for the nice review, Jaded.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Patricia;
Thank you for sharing your entry in the Five Line Poem contest. The use of color to accentuate the color of the changing leaves was wonderful. Good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017

Thank you for the nice review, Patty.

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Hi Patricia
A lovely five line poem about Autumn which paints a wonderful picture of the different colour leaves laying across the ground. Fantastic graphics which accompany your words brilliantly.
Mitchell

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017

Thank you for the nice review, Mitchell.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Autumn's bed of leaves. So true, Patricia. The autumn colors do make the season exciting for us. Nicely composed and presented with your computerize image. Marilyn

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017

Thank you for the nice review, Marilyn. How irt you foot doing?

reply by BeasPeas on 30-Oct-2017

Hi Patricia. The foot--ugggghhhh! I can't wait till I can walk on my own two feet. Housebound and still not driving, wearing a boot. It's been a long haul BUT I'm grateful that each day I'm progressing. Thank you for asking. Marilyn

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

I am impressed. You have done a lovely job with this fun contest entry. You have perfect syllable count and presented the poem so artistically too. Great work with this one and I sincerely wish you all the best in this contest too.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017

Thank you for the nice review, Sasha.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Pat

= Beautifully penned poem about Autumn.
= Love, love your gorgeous artwork.
= All-around super entry for the contest. Good Luck.
= Going on a long weekend holiday, so won't be online to review for a few days.

Cheers, J
Have a great day/evening.
(*>*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-Down (*<*)

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017

Thank you for the nice review, Jackie.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Patricia, This is a very nicely 5 Line Poem you have written for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery from your computer. Great job! Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017

Thank you for the nice review, Teri.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I enjoyed your abstract artwork and its autumn colors, echoing in your font selections. Your adding a bit of rhyme to the 5 Line Poem and the use of the "bed" metaphor added to its intensity. Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017

Thank you for the nice review, Joan.