Winds Slash
Cold autumn night3 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good Onomatopoeia,using lots of imitative sound words.
Tells a good story of the cold, blowing wind outside and the comfort in the house.
Good luck in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017
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A good Onomatopoeia,using lots of imitative sound words.
Tells a good story of the cold, blowing wind outside and the comfort in the house.
Good luck in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 29-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017
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Happy you like my effort. Thank you for the read.
Comment from RodG
Although the actual onomatopoeia is sparse, I like the imagery of this poem. YOU PUT ME THERE during that winter morning as the storm blows outside and sends branches crashing. I especially like sharing hot tea with the Speaker, curled under bed clothes reading a book.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Although the actual onomatopoeia is sparse, I like the imagery of this poem. YOU PUT ME THERE during that winter morning as the storm blows outside and sends branches crashing. I especially like sharing hot tea with the Speaker, curled under bed clothes reading a book.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Appreciate the read and the tip. I will work on increasing the amount of onomatopoeic words.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes we hibernate during the winter months and we hear the crash bang wallop but stay under our covers until spring! Loving your rhyme and flow and perfect art work, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Yes we hibernate during the winter months and we hear the crash bang wallop but stay under our covers until spring! Loving your rhyme and flow and perfect art work, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Hi Dolly,
Appreciate your read and your comments. I like the word wallop.
