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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Mitchell Brontė
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Hi Bill,
Loved this cleverly written 5-7-5 about the walrus, genius inclusion on the Latin phrase that fitted in wonderfully with the theme of the poem.
Loved it......
Mitchell

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
    Thanks, Mitchell
Comment from nomi338
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Whoa, this dude had a serious overbite. I would hate to have to pay his dental bills. I am sure that nature had a plan for the design of each creature, and I am sure that the design served a particular purpose. I am also sure that over time the makeup of certain creatures modified to assure that they were able to cope with changes in the atmosphere and other physical changes in their world. Which just goes to prove that our creator was pretty wise.. However, I still fail to see the need for heads that go bald and bellies that grow fat.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
    Thanks, nomi, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. Well, one has to know enough Beatles to get the humor. Thanks for the interesting scientific word for walrus. I just read that the eggman was the singer for the Animals. Or maybe Lewis Carroll...

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
    Went with this to open Walrus World. Now what?
reply by lyenochka on 26-Oct-2017
    Are walruses and seals friends? Maybe you could write about this:
    https://www.usnews.com/news/best-states/alaska/articles/2017-10-25/bearded-seal-removed-from-northern-alaska-airports-runway
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Bill, very good. I liked it a lot. Now you're introducing us to walruses. I liked it a lot. To be able to post this I need to say something more. Well. I liked it. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
    Thanks, Ulla. I liked your review a lot. Bill
Comment from damommy
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I feel I have to look this up in order to review. Educational as well as entertaining.

I think Walrus World may be very interesting. 8-)

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
    Thanks, da. It's the scientific name for walrus. Egg man refers to the Beatles.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Okay, I will go and look those words up! LOL, it certainly caught the eye.
I take it, that is the name of the walrus in the picture. I've probably got that wrong too. It doesn't matter, you've done a fine job with this, it's got my brain working. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
    Magical Mystery Tour
    The Beatles