On A Doorstep
A poem about feelings.15 total reviews
Comment from royowen
God has always come to me in one form or another, at a time I thought He had better things to do. But better things for Him are caring for us when we are low, when we think He's not there, in this case, a daisy! Well done Maria, beautifully written free verse, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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God has always come to me in one form or another, at a time I thought He had better things to do. But better things for Him are caring for us when we are low, when we think He's not there, in this case, a daisy! Well done Maria, beautifully written free verse, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Thanks, Roy. Have a lovely day.
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You too Maria, Roy
Comment from DR DIP
Interesting write from you tonight Maria. I like it. I like the line When you cannot.
Nice metaphors throughout. A lot different to your normal style of poetry. Thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Interesting write from you tonight Maria. I like it. I like the line When you cannot.
Nice metaphors throughout. A lot different to your normal style of poetry. Thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Why different, Mark? I'm intrigued. I thought it was very 'me'.
Thanks for the review.
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It was just my opinion Maria. I am just used to your fantasy style posts and poetry. it is still good otherwise I would not have given you a 5
respectfully dip
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Oh, but I wasn't offended, just curious, Mark.
Take care.
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sweet xxdip
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Ahhhhhh yes and good morning to you, Maria: This is a very unique poem and it definitely asks a useful question. This is a question that makes a mind think to come up with the just right answer. You also go into the "what if" and then you give us the answer. This was very well done, Maria and the answer was a relief that splendidly says, "When you think you cannot -- you really can! Also things will get better and that daisy on your doorstep is a way that life reassures us of this reality.
Great Poem.
Hey Maria - could you read , My Love, "When God Made Me" and tell me what you honestly think! Is anything about it redundant or trying too hard. I was told this about this poem so I would like to hear what you think, Please... You really don't have to but should you feel up to it one day, I'd appreciate it. I will ask the others who have read it also. Yes, it did bother me to hear this but if the poem is not okay then I will continue to work on it. Thank you in advance!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Ahhhhhh yes and good morning to you, Maria: This is a very unique poem and it definitely asks a useful question. This is a question that makes a mind think to come up with the just right answer. You also go into the "what if" and then you give us the answer. This was very well done, Maria and the answer was a relief that splendidly says, "When you think you cannot -- you really can! Also things will get better and that daisy on your doorstep is a way that life reassures us of this reality.
Great Poem.
Hey Maria - could you read , My Love, "When God Made Me" and tell me what you honestly think! Is anything about it redundant or trying too hard. I was told this about this poem so I would like to hear what you think, Please... You really don't have to but should you feel up to it one day, I'd appreciate it. I will ask the others who have read it also. Yes, it did bother me to hear this but if the poem is not okay then I will continue to work on it. Thank you in advance!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Thanks, Tier.
I'll read your poem in a jiffy. Take care.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about ur inner thoughts that can torment us from time to time. When we are at our lowest and on the brink to give up, we find a little flower at our doorstep blooming vibrantly.
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A very well-written poem about ur inner thoughts that can torment us from time to time. When we are at our lowest and on the brink to give up, we find a little flower at our doorstep blooming vibrantly.
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Thanks, Teri.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Maria.
Darn, mate, I wish I had a six left. This is such a beautiful piece of heartfelt poetry.
The picture is perfect and the ending sums the piece up wonderfully and sends the message home well.
Your talent is on display once again.
Great work, I loved it.
Cheers Fez
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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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G'day Maria.
Darn, mate, I wish I had a six left. This is such a beautiful piece of heartfelt poetry.
The picture is perfect and the ending sums the piece up wonderfully and sends the message home well.
Your talent is on display once again.
Great work, I loved it.
Cheers Fez
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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You're always too kind, Fez.
Thanks for the positive feedback.
Take care.
