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Tonight She's Hypnotic

Free Verse

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Comment from robyn corum
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GA,

I won't claim to have understood all of your poem, but it did read in a uniquely different and unusual manner. Lending itself to multiple reads... which was nice. *smile*

I finally decided she sounds a bit like a black widow... am I close?

One tiny suggestion, if I may?
1.) she swayed her moves on (autumn's last) eve
--> otherwise it sounds like it was a year ago...?

Thanks and good luck!

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2017

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks for Satan's Halloween she is hypnotic tonight and maybe she would be a slave tomorrow, that she is like this for she thinks she is in her last autumn's eve; I liked.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2017

Comment from DonandVicki
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Thank you, Gracie, for giving me a new look at Halloween, very subtle yet erotic images pop into my imagination. Well written and the most exciting Halloween poem I have read this season.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2017

Comment from Sharon Meda
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A colorful poem. The message is clear and definitely a new look at Halloween.
Well written, good flow.
Good luck in the Halloween contest and your future writing.
Sharon

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2017

Comment from Irish Rain
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Rather creepy...'Satan's Halloween!' She is apparently quite the 'witchy woman!' Loved this Miss Gracie... this is a great Halloween entry, quite original! Blessings...

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2017

Comment from TAB_that's me
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Oh GracieAnn, I love this Halloween poem. I didn't realize it was a Halloween until the end. Love the presentation as well.

teresa

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2017

Comment from royowen
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Ah! The price one pays for enjoying the allur of the flesh. It would seem, in my experience that sinfulness pays itself forward, and yet, it can be quickly reconciled to oblivion by turning one's back on it, unless of course it's a temporary antidote for the pain, beautifully written Gracie, in articulate free verse, well done, excellent entry in this Halloween contes, blessings and good luck, Roy

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2017

Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Halloween free verse poem. Mysterious and hypnotic to set the mood for Halloween feast. Halloween celebrations mesmerizing people to do unworldly things.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2017

Comment from country ranch writer
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Nice work up and presentation for this. Free and having a good time enjoyed by those who knew her. Fancy she was for at least a night of fun and games

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2017

Comment from Sankey
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Well done Sis. I think I wrote something on Halloween, myself, some time back. Maybe I should get it out again. Is it Halloween time again? Glad we are of the same mind on this wicked time. Wish you well in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2017