The Flower Poet and The Mermaid
free verse17 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the mermaid and the flower; there is no furore but silence around the sea, perchance an ode to the flower poet and mermaid gives the joy of the songs; I liked.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
This speaks about the mermaid and the flower; there is no furore but silence around the sea, perchance an ode to the flower poet and mermaid gives the joy of the songs; I liked.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Thank you for sharing the further adventures of the Flower Poet. I wonder where they will be next? This has a great deal of imagination,
~patty~
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
Hi there;
Thank you for sharing the further adventures of the Flower Poet. I wonder where they will be next? This has a great deal of imagination,
~patty~
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Thanks. Yes, I seem to be stuck on The Flower Poet. Elaine
Comment from Ricky1024
Hello dear you're mermaid poem mermaid was while waiting with great scripted measures it flowed well had no grammar issues the theme and imagery were present as well as adjective an object of content moving it along thanks for this doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
Hello dear you're mermaid poem mermaid was while waiting with great scripted measures it flowed well had no grammar issues the theme and imagery were present as well as adjective an object of content moving it along thanks for this doctor Ricky
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from country ranch writer
Beautiful looking mermaids Ti entice the pirate into the arms of the watery deep. Such a sneak she is using another to reep the rewards she seeks into her cavern so deep
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
Beautiful looking mermaids Ti entice the pirate into the arms of the watery deep. Such a sneak she is using another to reep the rewards she seeks into her cavern so deep
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Any thing that has to do with the sirens song has me hooked but I must confess I don't understand this one and the Flower Poet. Please help me
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
Any thing that has to do with the sirens song has me hooked but I must confess I don't understand this one and the Flower Poet. Please help me
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Just a silly story where the pirate was expecting the mermaid and the flower grabs him instead. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Ooooo, this is a really cool poem you've penned, I really love it. I love magical stories and mermaids. lol This was really good with such a pretty picture to go with it.
~Kerry
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
Ooooo, this is a really cool poem you've penned, I really love it. I love magical stories and mermaids. lol This was really good with such a pretty picture to go with it.
~Kerry
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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I am so glad you enjoyed this unique tale. Thanks for reading and enjoying. I appreciate your encouraging comments. Elaine
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Your very welcome:)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I though this was a lovely poem. I love the story that it tells. This is creative, enjoyable and very unique. Great job.
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
I though this was a lovely poem. I love the story that it tells. This is creative, enjoyable and very unique. Great job.
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine