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Satan's Minions

Witches carry out satanic ritual

6 total reviews 
Comment from E.J. Galusha
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I so see Vincent Price narrating this piece in a sequel to The Conqueror Worm. You've got an authentic, convincing voice. Visualization superb. Your word choices and cadence are excellent.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
    Thank you so much for your read and your kind words.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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This is excellent. Your rhymes are perfect. You don't miss any. Could you please ask the two witches on the end to turn around. These don't look like the witches that come to my house.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
    I will but those gals only have eyes for me. Thanks for the read and the kind words.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem. Halloween is indeed a Satan's feast and so many people are deceived by the fun activities and they can't see the evil that is hidden in the so-called fun.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
    Yes, evil does lurk in the hearts of some of us. It is too bad. But, at least the children have fun. Thanks for the read and the comment.
Comment from marybell1
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I enjoyed reading your Halloween poem "Satan's Minions". You chose a perfect picture for your poem and you rhymed except in verse three lines one and two., An ' s ' does alter the rhyming
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
    Thanks for your read and your comments.
reply by marybell1 on 26-Oct-2017
    You are welcome.
    Marybell1.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks how the witches carry out their satanic rituals and celebrate their own appreciation of Halloween as their order of practice is somewhat different from the mortals; I liked.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
    Thanks for your read and your comments.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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hello Harry. Hmmmm that picture has me thinking you view Halloween somewhat differently than others do lol. You have a great imagination and a spectacular way with words. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
    Oh, well. Got tired of the trick or treat way. Thought this view was more interesting. Thanks for the read and the comments.