The hurt in Suzie's eyes
That inner pain19 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I thought it was about someone you knew at first Dip? It's difficult to help those with depression as they become quite self absorbed and my first husband suffered on occasions, a heartfelt write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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I thought it was about someone you knew at first Dip? It's difficult to help those with depression as they become quite self absorbed and my first husband suffered on occasions, a heartfelt write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Thankyou so much Dolly. I actually do know someone like Suzie but there are many 'Suzies' out there
Thanks so much for commenting and caring as you do
xdip
Comment from jenintorre
A very highly charged and emotional poem. It has a lovely rhythm and flow to it and
Portrays a very meaningful message. Well done. Best wishes. Jen
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A very highly charged and emotional poem. It has a lovely rhythm and flow to it and
Portrays a very meaningful message. Well done. Best wishes. Jen
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much Jen much appreciated
dip
Comment from Pantygynt
You know something, Dip? You are a really nice guy. There are far too many Suzies in this world. Some of them make really good poets too. I think you have to have been touched by pain to write about pain in others. I am using the word "pain" here in its widest sense -- like the Suzies of this world,
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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You know something, Dip? You are a really nice guy. There are far too many Suzies in this world. Some of them make really good poets too. I think you have to have been touched by pain to write about pain in others. I am using the word "pain" here in its widest sense -- like the Suzies of this world,
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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You know something Panty? I am a nice guy lol well I liked to think I am I know i am a compassionate and loyal friend but I know I must be an arsehol as well because my wife sometimes tells me that I am lol
Thanks as always Panty You are a good Fanstory friend and I really think we would get on as friends in the real world
dip
Comment from Heather Knight
You're such a great guy, Mark. Even before I read the poem, I was already in love with the title.
And then I read the author's notes and decided you deserved the six stars for sure.
Wonderful post altogether.
Thanks for caring.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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You're such a great guy, Mark. Even before I read the poem, I was already in love with the title.
And then I read the author's notes and decided you deserved the six stars for sure.
Wonderful post altogether.
Thanks for caring.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Thankyou so much Maria you continually make my day with your reviews and comments.
Yep I am a great guy lol just tell my wife she might get the message haha
Thanks so much for the wonderful six
xdip
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I'll talk to her.Don't worry ;) But you know what they say: familiarity...
Comment from closetpoetjester
Wow! I thought you knew a Suzie. This was tender and heartfelt and thoughtfully penned dip. I'm sure everyone knows a Suzie. This had a very musical feel to it.
I liked this stanza the best
"If only we could understand
That pain that lies within
If only I could take her hand
And help her return her grin"
There would be many that could relate to this with their own story of hidden pain.
Great job dip
Px
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Wow! I thought you knew a Suzie. This was tender and heartfelt and thoughtfully penned dip. I'm sure everyone knows a Suzie. This had a very musical feel to it.
I liked this stanza the best
"If only we could understand
That pain that lies within
If only I could take her hand
And help her return her grin"
There would be many that could relate to this with their own story of hidden pain.
Great job dip
Px
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much My sweet P you are so sweet lately....... are you ok? lol
xxdip
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Too much fuckin sugar LOL
Comment from robyn corum
Dip,
I agree. And I can think of at least two people here on FanStory right off who are DEEPLY hurting and needing all the support they can get from friends and fans and caring folk. You know, we never, ever know what a simple kind word can mean to someone. And they cost us NOTHING. Thanks for the reminder!
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Dip,
I agree. And I can think of at least two people here on FanStory right off who are DEEPLY hurting and needing all the support they can get from friends and fans and caring folk. You know, we never, ever know what a simple kind word can mean to someone. And they cost us NOTHING. Thanks for the reminder!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Thankyou so much Robyn as always I am glad you concur.
dip
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written thought provoking and heartfelt poem. There are many people who struggle daily with inner pains that no one else can ever guess. When they know there s someone caring they will seek the helpbthey need.
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A very well-written thought provoking and heartfelt poem. There are many people who struggle daily with inner pains that no one else can ever guess. When they know there s someone caring they will seek the helpbthey need.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Thankyou as always Sandra alway appreciate your insight and review
dip
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
What a wonderful piece on feeling and emotion. Bringing out the plight of another in this way and bringing it to attention, please reach out and help. It is so easy to walk on by. Excellent ABAB as always
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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What a wonderful piece on feeling and emotion. Bringing out the plight of another in this way and bringing it to attention, please reach out and help. It is so easy to walk on by. Excellent ABAB as always
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
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Thankyou so much Barb always appreciate your comments
dip
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You are right Dr D. So many suffer alone. Great advice with your poem. Good job on rhyming & smooth flow. But most of all, your message is a standout. Thanks for sharing & caring. Jan
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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You are right Dr D. So many suffer alone. Great advice with your poem. Good job on rhyming & smooth flow. But most of all, your message is a standout. Thanks for sharing & caring. Jan
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much Jan I am glad you got my message
Always appreciate your reviews
dip
